First of all, I would like to thank you all for always correcting me. First of all, I would like to thank you all for correcting me.

More natural!

This assignment is due in two months but I wishould like to complete it earlier so I'll have more free time in the futurelater. This assignment is due in two months but I would like to complete it earlier so I'll have more free time later.

This assignment is due in two months but I wish to complete it earlier so I'll have more free time in the future. This assignment is due in two months but I wish to complete it earlier so I'll have more free time in the future.

This assignment is due in two months but I wish complete it earlier so that I'll have more free time in the future. This assignment is due in two months but I wish complete it earlier so that I'll have more free time.

the future is implied !

In this assignment I need to write things I would like to improve about myself, emotionally, professionally and economicfinancially. In this assignment I need to write things I would like to improve about myself, emotionally, professionally and financially.

In this assignment I need to write things I would like to improve about myself,: emotionally, professionally, and economically. In this assignment I need to write things I would like to improve about myself: emotionally, professionally, and economically.

A colon is used to introduce a list of things.

Think about things in your life that you would like to improve in your lifeon. Think about things in your life that you would like to improve on.

Or: Think about things that you would like to improve on in your life.

I want to finish my book "a mA Mind for nNumbers." I want to finish my book "A Mind for Numbers."

I want to finish my book "a mA Mind for nNumbers" I want to finish my book "A Mind for Numbers"

Use capital letters for names of things

I want to finish my book "a ma book summary I am writing, on a book called "A Mind for nNumbers" I want to finish a book summary I am writing, on a book called "A Mind for Numbers"

I am going to assume it is a book you are writing. Titles of anything streets, names, companies, books need capitals always !

I want to organize my time efficiently my time. I want to organize my time efficiently.

I want to organize efficiently my timemanage my time more effectively. I want to manage my time more effectively.

Sounds more natural.

I want to organize my time more efficiently my time. I want to organize my time more efficiently.

or: I want to spend my time more efficiently.

I want to improve my Japanese, and be able to speak more fluently. I want to improve my Japanese and be able to speak more fluently.

-In the next year.: -In the next year:

-InNext year/over the next year. Next year/over the next year.

I want to master English. I want to master English.

-In two years.: -In two years:

EmotiPersonal (family and friends). Personal (family and friends).

I want to be more kind with people, and smile more. I want to be more kind with people and smile more.

I want to be more kinder with people, and smile more. I want to be kinder with people, and smile more.

I want to be more kind with more people, and to smile more often. I want to be kind with more people, and to smile more often.

-In the next year.: -In the next year:

-InNext year/over the next year. Next year/over the next year

I want to take care of my grandmother so she canwill live longer. I want to take care of my grandmother so she will live longer.

-In two years.: -In two years:

I want to have friends from other countries such as Japanese, Chinesea and the United States people. I want to have friends from other countries such as Japan, China and the United States.

I want to have friends from other countries such as Japanese, Chinese and United States people. I want to have friends from other countries such as Japanese, Chinese and United States people.

I want to have friends from other countries, such as Japan, China, and the United States. Or I want to have Japanese, Chinese, and American friends.

I want to have friends from other countries such as Japanese, Chinesea and the United States people. I want to have friends from other countries such as Japan, China and the United States.

No need to say people, friends is implied as humans already!

I want to sew more clothes in order to become a professional fashion designer. I want to sew more clothes in order to become a professional fashion designer.

I want to sew more clothes to help me become a professional fashion designer. I want to sew more clothes to help me become a professional fashion designer.

I think this sounds better

I want to sew more clothes toso that I can become a professional fashion designer. I want to sew more clothes so that I can become a professional designer.

Or: I want to make more clothes so that I can be a professional designer.

-In the next year.: -In the next year:

-InNext year/Over the next year. Next year/Over the next year.

I want to watch interonlinet courses related to fashion design to improve my sewing skills. I want to watch online courses related to fashion design to improve my sewing skills.

We tend to call them online courses instead.

I want to watch internet courses related to fashion design in order to improve my sewing skillskills in sewing. I want to watch internet courses related to fashion design in order to improve my skills in sewing.

More natural, the tone is more imperative and emphasises the purpose of the internet courses ! (With the in order to)

-In two years.: -In two years:

I want to read the book "The Cashflow Quadrant" so I can stop trading time for money and start creating systems that works for me instead of me working for systems. I want to read the book "The Cashflow Quadrant" so I can stop trading time for money and start creating systems that work for me instead of me working for systems.

I want to read the book "The Cashflow Quadrant" so I can stop trading time for money, and start creating systems that works for me instead of me working for systhems. I want to read the book "The Cashflow Quadrant" so I can stop trading time for money, and start creating systems that work for me instead of me working for them.

Stope repetition.

I want to read the book "The Cashflow Quadrant" so that I can stop trading time for money and start creating systems that works for me instead of me working for systems. I want to read the book "The Cashflow Quadrant" so that I can stop trading time for money and start creating systems that works for me instead of me working for systems.

-In the next year.: -In the next year:

-InOver the next year./next year Over the next year/next year

-In two years.: -In two years:

I want to improve my skills, such as sewing and speaking languages, so I can get a better job. I want to improve my skills, such as sewing and speaking languages, so I can get a better job.

I want to improve my skills I already have such as sewing and my speaking languages soproficiency in the languages I have been learning so that I can get a better job. I want to improve skills I already have such as sewing and my speaking proficiency in the languages I have been learning so that I can get a better job.

I will be taller, and my hair will be longer. I will be taller and my hair will be longer.

I will be a polyglot; that will allows me to have friends from other countries and access to more information. I will be a polyglot; that will allow me to have friends from other countries and access to more information.

I will be a polyglot; that will allows me to have friends from other countries and access tomore information. Or: and to access more information. I will be a polyglot; that will allow me to have friends from other countries and access more information. Or: and to access more information

I will be a polyglot; thatis will allows me to have friends from other countries and to have better access to more information. I will be a polyglot; this will allows me to have friends from other countries and to have better access to more information.

I will master English and Japanese and I will have started learning a new language. I will master English and Japanese and I will have started learning a new language.

I will be efficient, and be able to organize and prioritize important goals such as studiesy and work. I will be efficient and be able to organize and prioritize important goals such as study and work.

I will be efficient, and be able to organize and prioritize important goals such as my studies and workmy job. I will be efficient, and be able to organize and prioritize important goals such as my studies and my job.

I will be more kind and friendly (to others). I will be more kind and friendly (to others).

I will improve my sewing, dancing, and painting skills. I will improve my sewing, dancing, and painting skills.

I will improve my sewing, dancing, and painting skills. I will improve my sewing, dancing, and painting skills.

I will improve my sewing, dancing, and painting skills. I will improve my sewing, dancing and painting skills.

I will be healthier,; I will eat the nutrients that my body needs. I will be healthier; I will eat the nutrients that my body needs.

I will read several books; therefore I will have morea bigger/wider vocabulary. I will read several books; therefore I will have a bigger/wider vocabulary.

I will read several books; therefore and thus I will have morean extended vocabulary. I will read several books and thus I will have an extended vocabulary.

Or: I will have a broader vocabulary.