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An essay is usually something much longer, with multiple paragraphs. Instead you could say “journal entry” or something similar.

This is themy first time to post an essay journal on this website. This is my first time to post a journal on this website.

Correct me if I’m wrongPlease correct my mistakes. Please correct my mistakes.

It was a cComing of aAge dDay today in Japan. It was Coming of Age Day today in Japan.

People who becoame 20 years of age celebrate being an adult. People who became 20 years of age celebrate being an adult.

you can also say “people who turned 20 years old”. Also, I changed it to “became” because i’m assuming everyone is already 20 at this event” but if not it should be “people who will become 20...”

People who become 20 years of agehave turned or will turn 20 years of age between April 2 of the previous year and April 1 of the current year celebrate being an adult. People who have turned or will turn 20 years of age between April 2 of the previous year and April 1 of the current year celebrate being an adult.

The dates are according to Wikipedia.

It’s one of the Japanese traditional Japanese events. It’s one of the traditional Japanese events.

It’s one of the Japanesea traditional Japanese events. It’s a traditional Japanese event.