Oct. 28, 2021
workaholic
Somebody says I'm a workaholic but I don't think so and, as an evidence, here's a talk between me and my good friend Sloth Lazyboy.
Sloth : couldn't you go to the movies this evening , could you ?
Me : I'm afraid I couldn't, could I ? because I'm too buzy, I've to work overtime.
S : you're kidding me, aren't you ? You never take time to relax, don't you ? You always answer « I need to work overtime », don't you again ?
M : you cannot understand. I have good working conditions, my boss is a nice fellow and when he says « meet your deadlines ! » I know it's fair, isn't it ?
S : never mind, forget, but I think you spend a lot of time at work, you never take time off work, don't you ?
M : yes, you're right, aren't you ? But I have time to relax, I can take time for a nap in the afternoon if I want, so, please, make your own business, would you ?
S : beware, nonetheless, you should care of yourself, shouldn't you? I knew a lot of good men who were real hard workers but all these men , anyway , get the same address « Graveyard number something », RIP, I hope you wouldn't rejoin them , would you ?
M : maybe, you're right, aren't you ? I'm gonna think about it and try to find time to relax, maybe in 2022, thanks for the advice my dear friend !
S: anyway, you should stop taking work home, shouldn't you ?
M: of course, I will, in 2023.
S : It's up to you, so now, let me relax 'cause it's time for to go to my lovely nice morning nap.
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Workaholic
Somebody says I'm a workaholic but I don't think so and, as an evidence, here's a talk between me and my good friend Sloth Lazyboy.
Somebody says I'm a workaholic but I don't think so and, as evidence, here's a talk between me and my good friend Sloth Lazyboy.
Sloth : cWouldn't you like to go to the movies this evening , could you ?
Sloth : Would you like to go to the movies this evening?
Me : I'm afraid I couldn't, could I ?an't
Me : I'm afraid I can't
because I'm too buzsy, I' have to work overtime.
because I'm too busy, I have to work overtime.
S : you're kidding me, aren't you ?
S : you're kidding me?
You never take time to relax, don't you ?
You never take time to relax, do you?
You always answer « I need to work overtime », don't you again ?
You always answer « I need to work overtime », don't you?
M : you cannot understand.
But I have time to relax, I can take time for a nap in the afternoon if I want, so, please, makeind your own business, would you ?
But I have time to relax, I can take time for a nap in the afternoon if I want, so, please, mind your own business, would you ?
in this sentance the 'would you?' at the end makes sense, but is still not necessary.
I knew a lot of good men who were real hard workers but all these men , anyway , get the same address « Graveyard number something », RIP, I hope you wouldn't rejoin them , wouldill you ?
I knew a lot of good men who were real hard workers but all these men , anyway , get the same address « Graveyard number something », RIP, I hope you won't join them , will you ?
M: of course, I will, in 2023.
M: of course I will, in 2023.
S : It's up to you, so now, let me relax 'cause it's time for to go to my lovelytake a nice morning nap.
S : It's up to you, so now, let me relax 'cause it's time for to take a nice morning nap.
'to take a nap', or 'go for a nap'.
Then 'lovely' or 'nice', not both
The 'cause is never written like that, even if it is spoken that way sometimes
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There are a lot of "would you", "could you", and "should you" that aren't needed for the questions to make sense.
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Somebody says I'm a workaholic but I don't think so and, as an evidence, here's a talk between me and my good friend Sloth Lazyboy.
Somebody says I'm a workaholic but I don't think so and, as |
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Sloth : couldn't you go to the movies this evening , could you ?
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Me : I'm afraid I couldn't, could I ?
Me : I'm afraid I c |
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because I'm too buzy, I've to work overtime.
because I'm too bu |
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S : you're kidding me, aren't you ?
S : you're kidding me |
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You never take time to relax, don't you ?
You never take time to relax, do |
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You always answer « I need to work overtime », don't you again ?
You always answer « I need to work overtime », don't you |
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M : you cannot understand. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I have good working conditions, my boss is a nice fellow and when he says « meet your deadlines ! |
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» I know it's fair, isn't it ? |
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S : never mind, forget, but I think you spend a lot of time at work, you never take time off work, don't you ? |
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M : yes, you're right, aren't you ? |
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But I have time to relax, I can take time for a nap in the afternoon if I want, so, please, make your own business, would you ?
But I have time to relax, I can take time for a nap in the afternoon if I want, so, please, m in this sentance the 'would you?' at the end makes sense, but is still not necessary. |
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S : beware, nonetheless, you should care of yourself, shouldn't you? |
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I knew a lot of good men who were real hard workers but all these men , anyway , get the same address « Graveyard number something », RIP, I hope you wouldn't rejoin them , would you ?
I knew a lot of good men who were real hard workers but all these men , anyway , get the same address « Graveyard number something », RIP, I hope you wo |
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M : maybe, you're right, aren't you ? |
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I'm gonna think about it and try to find time to relax, maybe in 2022, thanks for the advice my dear friend ! |
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S: anyway, you should stop taking work home, shouldn't you ? |
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M: of course, I will, in 2023.
M: of course |
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S : It's up to you, so now, let me relax 'cause it's time for to go to my lovely nice morning nap.
S : It's up to you, so now, let me relax 'cause it's time for to 'to take a nap', or 'go for a nap'. Then 'lovely' or 'nice', not both The 'cause is never written like that, even if it is spoken that way sometimes |
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