The English lLanguage The English Language

The English lLanguage The English Language

I really like the English language because of how its sounds. I really like the English language because of how it sounds.

I really like the English language because of the way its sounds. I really like the English language because of the way it sounds.

PThe pitch always varies. The pitch always varies.

PThe pitch always varies. or The pitch is always varying. The pitch always varies. or The pitch is always varying.

PThe pitch always varies. The pitch always varies.

PThe pitch always varies. The pitch always varies.

PThe pitch always varies. or You could combine the sentence above and this one by writing: "The English language sounds so beautiful to me because the pitch always varies". The pitch always varies. or You could combine the sentence above and this one by writing: "The English language sounds so beautiful to me because the pitch always varies".

PIt's pitch always varies. It's pitch always varies.

PThe pitch always varies. The pitch always varies.

Another correction that someone made is "It's pitch always varies." This actually has a typo; it should be "Its pitch always varies."

The Japanese language sounds flat, doesn't it? or The Japanese language sounds flat, don't you think? The Japanese language sounds flat, doesn't it? or The Japanese language sounds flat, don't you think?

The second would sound a bit more natural.

TIn contrast, the Japanese language sounds flat, doesn't it? In contrast, the Japanese language sounds flat, doesn't it?

Adding "In contrast" or any other contrastive (=opposition when you compare two different things) conjunction such as "On the contrary" makes the text flow better when comparing two things (in this case you are comparing the English language to the Japanese language).

The Japanese language sounds so flat, doesn't it? The Japanese language sounds so flat, doesn't it?

I think this sounds more natural.