June 18, 2023
I Saw “CATS”
I went to see a musical show “CATS” by Siki theater Company, with my mother.
In the show, various type of cats appeared and they sang and danced about their life’s stories.
The actors were great and stage equipments were also wonderful.
After seeing the show, I told my mother “We would like to dance if we saw a show like that wouldn’t we?”
Then her answered “No, I’m not at all. You are young.”
I don’t think so. It’s not relationship with ages.
キャッツ見た。
母と一緒に劇団四季のミュージカル「キャッツ」を見てきた。
キャッツではいろんな猫たちがでてきて、それぞれの猫生（？）について歌い踊って伝える。
役者も素晴らしいし、舞台装置もよかった。
公演後に母に「ああいうの見てると踊りたくなるよね？」と言ったら、「ならないよ。若いね」って言われた。
そうかな？年には関係ないと思う。
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I Saw “CATS”
I went to see athe musical show “CATS” by Siki tTheater Company, with my mother.
I went to see the musical “CATS” by Siki Theater Company with my mother.
あるいは、
I went to see the musical “CATS” performed by the Siki Theater Company with my mother.
楽しそうです！
In the show, various types of cats appeared and they sang and danced about their life’s stories. In the show, various types of cats appeared and they sang and danced about their life’s stories.
The actors were great and the stage equipments wereas also wonderful.
The actors were great and the stage equipment was also wonderful.
よかった！
After seeing the show, I told my mother, “We would like to dance if we saw a show like that wouldn’t we?”
Then Seeing something like that makes you want to dance, doesn't it?” Sher answered, “No, I’m not at all.
After seeing the show, I told my mother, “Seeing something like that makes you want to dance, doesn't it?” She answered, “No, not at all.
また、
She answered, “No, it doesn't.
You are young.” I don’t think so.
It’s not relationship withed to ages.
It’s not related to age.
あるいは、
- It's not related to how old we are.
- I don't think age has anything to do with it.
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そうですね。私は、あまり若くないですが、いつも踊りたいで、特に、「Cats」みたいなミュージカルの後です。＾＾
とてもいい話です。上手に書けています！
July 1, 2023
添削ありがとうございます。
ミュージカル見たあとは、踊りたくなりますよね。
I Saw “CATS”
I went with my mother to see athe musical show “CATS” by the Siki theater Company, with my mother.
I went with my mother to see the musical show “CATS” by the Siki theater Company.
In the show, various type of cats appeared and they sang and danced about their life’s stories.
The actors were great and stage equipments wereas also wonderful.
The actors were great and stage equipment was also wonderful.
After seeing the show, I said told my mother “We would like to dance if we saw a show like that wouldn’t we?”
Then sher answered “No, I’m no wouldn't at all., but
After seeing the show, I said to my mother “We would like to dance if we saw a show like that wouldn’t we?”
Then she answered “No, I wouldn't at all, but
Yyou are young.”
I don’t think so.
you are young.”
I don’t think so.
It’s not a relationship withof similar ages.
It’s not a relationship of similar ages.
July 1, 2023
Thank you for your corrections.
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I went to see a musical show “CATS” by Siki theater Company, with my mother.
I went with my mother to see
I went to see あるいは、 I went to see the musical “CATS” performed by the Siki Theater Company with my mother. 楽しそうです！ |
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In the show, various type of cats appeared and they sang and danced about their life’s stories. This sentence has been marked as perfect! In the show, various types of cats appeared and they sang and danced about their life’s stories. In the show, various types of cats appeared and they sang and danced about their life’s stories. |
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The actors were great and stage equipments were also wonderful.
The actors were great and stage equipment
The actors were great and the stage equipment よかった！ |
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After seeing the show, I told my mother “We would like to dance if we saw a show like that wouldn’t we?” Then her answered “No, I’m not at all.
After seeing the show, I said to
After seeing the show, I told my mother, “ また、 She answered, “No, it doesn't. |
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You are young.” I don’t think so.
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It’s not relationship with ages.
It’s not a relationship
It’s not relat あるいは、 - It's not related to how old we are. - I don't think age has anything to do with it. |
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