July 28, 2020
Public Transportation Conclusion
Generally speaking, public transport is far more efficient and environment-friendly for cities than the means of personal transport. It can be difficult at first for people to stop using their cars, but as a result it will be better for everyone. In majority of cases, however, it costs city administration greater expenses to purchase public transport models and recreate streets, therefore this measure should be planned some time ahead.
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Generally speaking, public transportation is far more efficient and environmentally-friendly for cities than the means of personal transportation.
It can be difficult at first for people to stop using their cars, but as a result it will be better for everyone.
InHowever, in the majority of cases, however, it costs the city administration greater expenses to purchase public transportation models and recreate streets, t. Therefore this measure should be planned some time, implementing public transportation requires much planning ahead.
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Your vocabular is very good. The main thing I noticed is that "transport" should be "transportation" (transport is a verb; transportation is a noun). Even though you bring up good points, I could not give up my car haha. I find it so much faster and time-saving to drive lol, especially when going camping or to a beach. I have a hybrid car though, so I don't feel too terrible haha. Overall an interesting entry :)
July 29, 2020
Thanks!
Generally speaking, public transportation is far more efficient and environmentally-friendly for cities than the means of personalprivate transportation.
It can be difficult at first for people to stop using their cars, but as athe result it will be better for everyone.
How you wrote it, with "as a result," made it sounds like it was a result of the difficulty.
In the majority of cases, however, it costs city administration greater expensesis expensive for the city to purchase public transport models and recreatedesign streets, therefore this measure should be planned some time aheadin advance.
I didn't know what you meant by "public transport models" so I left it there. Maybe you meant subway cars and so on? You could use the words vehicles, maybe, or better yet get specific. Or if you mean the actual building of a subway line, you could say "infrastructure."
July 29, 2020
In the majority of cases, however, it costs city administration greater expensesis expensive for the city to purchase public transport models and recreatedesign streets, therefore this measure should be planned some time aheadin advance.
Yes. I meant subway cars, monorail cars and so on.
Public Transportation Conclusion
It canwill be difficult at first for people to stop using their cars, but as a result it will be better for everyone.
In the majority of cases, however, it costs city administration greateris expensives to purchase public transport modelsation infrastructure and recreatedesign streets, thereforeso this measure should be planned some time ahead.
I don't think models is quite the word you're looking for. Infrastructure in this context would mean the buses and trains but also tracks, parts, depots, etc.
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Good work!
July 29, 2020
Thank you!
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In majority of cases, however, it costs city administration greater expenses to purchase public transport models and recreate streets, therefore this measure should be planned some time ahead. In the majority of cases, however, it I don't think models is quite the word you're looking for. Infrastructure in this context would mean the buses and trains but also tracks, parts, depots, etc. In the majority of cases, however, it I didn't know what you meant by "public transport models" so I left it there. Maybe you meant subway cars and so on? You could use the words vehicles, maybe, or better yet get specific. Or if you mean the actual building of a subway line, you could say "infrastructure."
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