Aug. 24, 2020
Public Transport!
It is very important to use public transport instead of using private cars. This is because cars emit toxic gases into the atmosphere, and they make the air pollution even worse. This a reason why in many countries governments discourage people against using private vehicles.
In developing countries, the situation is out of control. In these countries, public transport is of inferior quality, and almost no one prefers to use it. People wish to buy a car, and at some point in their lives, they are able to afford one. In some countries, on average every family owns three vehicles, and it takes a lot of time to drive in a city because of too much congestion.
In order to improve the situation in these countries, governments should focus on improving public transport, so that people are encouraged to use it. Public transport should be safe, clean, and affordable.
In some countries, on average every family owns three vehicles, and it takes a lot of time to drive in a city because of tothere is so much congestion.
"too much congestion" implies that there is an acceptable amount of congestion.
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Very good! Small suggestion - I might usually use "personal vehicles" instead of "private vehicles."
Aug. 25, 2020
Thanks a lot for your help! Noted it.
Public Transport!
It is very important to use public transport instead of using private cars.
This is because cars emit toxic gases into the atmosphere, and they make the air pollution even worse.
This ais the reason why in many countries governments discourage people againstfrom using private vehicles.
"discourage from" is a more common word combo. "Against" makes the sentence not make sense.
In developing countries, the situation is out of control.
In these countries, public transport is of inferior quality, and almost no one prefers to use it.
People wish to buy a car, and at some point in their lives, they are able to afford one.
In some countries, on average every family owns three vehicles on average, and it takes a lot of time to drive in a city because of too much congestion.
In order to improve the situation in these countries, governments should focus on improving public transport, so that people are encouraged to use it.
Public transport should be safe, clean, and affordable.
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Great job.
Aug. 25, 2020
Thanks for the correction!
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Public Transport! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It is very important to use public transport instead of using private cars. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This is because cars emit toxic gases into the atmosphere, and they make the air pollution even worse. This is because cars emit toxic gases into the atmosphere, and they make |
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This a reason why in many countries governments discourage people against using private vehicles. This "discourage from" is a more common word combo. "Against" makes the sentence not make sense. |
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In developing countries, the situation is out of control. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In these countries, public transport is of inferior quality, and almost no one prefers to use it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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People wish to buy a car, and at some point in their lives, they are able to afford one. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In some countries, on average every family owns three vehicles, and it takes a lot of time to drive in a city because of too much congestion. In some countries, In some countries, on average every family owns three vehicles, and it takes a lot of time to drive in a city because "too much congestion" implies that there is an acceptable amount of congestion. |
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In order to improve the situation in these countries, governments should focus on improving public transport, so that people are encouraged to use it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Public transport should be safe, clean, and affordable. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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