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alexwong2164

Oct. 18, 2020

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Public bath / Café / Kyoto

Recently make a new friend.

She lives in Kyoto area.

For most Japan fans, Kyoto is a must-see area.

I still not have a chance go there.

When this virus crisis over, I must go there.

One of must try experience she suggests me is the “Public Bath”.

As an old fashion Chinese and I just hesitate to do that.

Anyway, so I type “public bath” and “Kyoto” in internet.

The first result is a café which transfer from a public bath house!

If you want to laugh, please do so.

But after you watch the video about this café.

Maybe you can’t wait to have a cup of coffee in this café.

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RI recently makde a new friend.

She lives in the Kyoto area.

I still not have a chance gohaven't had the chance to go/visit there.

When this virus crisis is over, I must go there.

One of the must try experiences she suggests to me is the “Public Bath”.

As an old fashion Chinese and, I just hesitate to do that.

Anyway, so I typed “public bath” and “Kyoto” in the internet.

The first result is a café which transfer fromis also a public bath house!

But after you watch the video about this café, maybe you can't wait to have a cup of coffee there.

The last two sentences should've been separated by a comma.

RI recently makde a new friend.

She lives in the Kyoto area.

For most Japan fans, Kyoto is a must-see area.

I still have not have ad the chance to go there.

When this virus crispandemic is over, I must go there.

One of must -try experiences she suggestsed to me is the “Ppublic Bbath.

As an old -fashioned Chinese and I justperson, I'm hesitante to do that.

Anyway, so I typegooglled “public bath” and “Kyoto” in internet."

The first result iwas a café which transfer fromwas built in a public bath house!

If you want to laugh, please do so – but only after you've watched the video about this café.

Maybe you can’t wait to have a cup of coffee in this café.

Public bath / Café / Kyoto


Recently make a new friend.


RI recently makde a new friend.

RI recently makde a new friend.

She lives in Kyoto area.


She lives in the Kyoto area.

She lives in the Kyoto area.

For most Japan fans, Kyoto is a must-see area.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I still not have a chance go there.


I still have not have ad the chance to go there.

I still not have a chance gohaven't had the chance to go/visit there.

When this virus crisis over, I must go there.


When this virus crispandemic is over, I must go there.

When this virus crisis is over, I must go there.

One of must try experience she suggests me is the “Public Bath”.


One of must -try experiences she suggestsed to me is the “Ppublic Bbath.

One of the must try experiences she suggests to me is the “Public Bath”.

As an old fashion Chinese and I just hesitate to do that.


As an old -fashioned Chinese and I justperson, I'm hesitante to do that.

As an old fashion Chinese and, I just hesitate to do that.

Anyway, so I type “public bath” and “Kyoto” in internet.


Anyway, so I typegooglled “public bath” and “Kyoto” in internet."

Anyway, so I typed “public bath” and “Kyoto” in the internet.

The first result is a café which transfer from a public bath house!


The first result iwas a café which transfer fromwas built in a public bath house!

The first result is a café which transfer fromis also a public bath house!

If you want to laugh, please do so.


If you want to laugh, please do so – but only after you've watched the video about this café.

But after you watch the video about this café.


But after you watch the video about this café, maybe you can't wait to have a cup of coffee there.

The last two sentences should've been separated by a comma.

Maybe you can’t wait to have a cup of coffee in this café.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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