A Letter About Motivation Letter

I am writing this letter to express my deeply motivation to apply for this scholarship in, for the architecture and urbanism course, ons provided by your university.

For me, this opportunity represents a life realization for the possibility of an excellent academic formundation, as well as for the knowledge, culture, and for the passion for the human and urban development.

My interest forin architecture has beguan in my childhood, a. At first, I liked tosimply observeing spaces, and understanding how the colors coame together and how a space canould change just by how it iwas organized.

"Has begun" is recent past, not distant past.

As I was growinggrew up, I also started to think in the houses beautyg about the beauty of homes, and how most public spaces awere inaccessible, and maybe I could be the change.

I imagine myself creating accessible spaces for everyone,: children, babies, elders, people with deficiencyisabilities, and muchany more.

During my academic trajectory, I could understanjourney, I learned the process of a construction, the impact that architecture has on the society, and how it is directly connected to how cultures are.

I have always wondered why I wanted to study in Italy, and I havebut I finally understood it, mand. My heart and my mind are in this country, for my passion for its culture and for theits incredibly legacy ine architectureal legacy.

"My heart and my mind are in this country" is grammatically correct, but feels a little awkward for some reason. Maybe: "My heart and my mind have always been in this country"?

This country has a very long history that is alwayswell preserved.

During the maintenance, they always bring modernity without erasing the historical elements and, of course, Italy is one of the biggest mundial references in architecture.

This scholarship is essential for me, to access this formation that will enable a full time dedication into studies and a life dream.

I'm not sure what you mean by "formation". Do you mean "resources".

You seem to be using the word "formation" where I would expect the word "foundation". So, maybe: "This scholarship is essential for me, to create a foundation that will enable..."

I believe that I have the necessary qualifications to ingress into this opportunity.

"Ingress" is a very fancy word I've never heard until just now. Looking at example sentences on online dictionaries, I think you're supposed to use "to" with it? I'm not entirely sure, though.

I am a focused, dedicated, responsible, and very curious person, and this makes me be more motivated and to. I always want to acquire more knowledge, and to question everything around me.

I want to learn more about the social and academic contexts, respecting the diversitiesy and to shareing experiences, and I promise to represent seriously the academic compromise that the scholarship requires.

You want to "represent" the academic "compromise" that the scholarship requires? I'm not sure what you mean by this sentence. "Represent" means you stand as an example of something, but a "compromise" is an unideal situation where multiple parties with different desires have to settle for something which neither of them really likes but which both of them can at least begrudgingly accept.

I conclude by reiterating my strong interest in joining your program and to building a solid formundation that will allow me to work in the most ethical way possible in the future,: with comfort, accessibility and historical preservation.