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A Clash of Kings

I'm currently reading "A Clash of Kings", the second book in George R.R. Martin's "A Song of Ice and Fire" series. The story is so intense that I want to quit my job so I can read it at home all day. I am at the last part of the book. I searched online and found out the series was planned to have seven volumes, but only five volumes have been published. And the last published one was 13 years ago, so I will probably have to wait forever... Nevertheless, good things are worth the wait. I still have a long way to go to finish the series. After that, maybe I will challeng myself by reading the series in its original English. I also know Martin has written other side stories for the series, so there are so many things to look forward to.

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I'm currently reading "A Clash of Kings", the second book in George R.R.

Martin's "A Song of Ice and Fire" series.

I also know Martin has written other side stories for the series, so there are so many things to look forward to.

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July 11, 2024

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A Clash of Kings

I'm currently reading "A Clash of Kings", the second book in George R.R.

Martin's "A Song of Ice and Fire" series.

The story is so intense that I want to quit my job so I can read it at home all day.

I am at the last part of the book.

Nevertheless, good things are worth the wait.

I still have a long way to go to finish the series.

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abc90377

July 11, 2024

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A Clash of Kings

And the last published one was 13 years ago, so I will probably have to wait forever...

I still have a long way to go to finish the series.

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abc90377

July 11, 2024

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A Clash of Kings

I'm currently reading "A Clash of Kings", the second book in George R.R.

I am at the last part of the book.

I searched online and found out the series was planned to have seven volumes, but only five volumes have been published.

And the last published one was 13 years ago, so I will probably have to wait forever...

Nevertheless, good things are worth the wait.

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abc90377

July 11, 2024

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I still have a long way to go to finish the series.


I still have a long way to go tobefore finishing the series. I still have a long way to go before finishing the series.

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I still have a long way to go to finish the entire series. I still have a long way to go to finish the entire series.

After that, maybe I will challeng myself by reading the series in its original English.


After that, maybe I will challenge myself by reading the series in its original English edition. After that, maybe I will challenge myself by reading the series in its original English edition.

After that, maybe I will challenge myself by reading the series in its original English. After that, maybe I will challenge myself by reading the series in its original English.

After that, maybe I will challenge myself by reading the series in its original English. After that, maybe I will challenge myself by reading the series in its original English.

After that, maybe I will challenge myself by reading the series in its original English. After that, maybe I will challenge myself by reading the series in its original English.

I also know Martin has written other side stories for the series, so there are so many things to look forward to.


I also know Martin has written other side storiespin-offs for the series, so there are so many things to look forward to. I also know Martin has written spin-offs for the series, so there are so many things to look forward to.

I also know Martin has also written other side stories for the series, so there are so many things to look forward to. I know Martin has also written other side stories for the series, so there are so many things to look forward to.

I also know Martin has written other side stories for the series, so there are so many other things to look forward to. I know Martin has written other side stories for the series, so there are many other things to look forward to.

To me, my edits sound a little more natural in English (American), but I had no problem understanding the sentence.

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A Clash of Kings


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ALSO POSSIBLE: George R. R. Martin's "A Clash of Kings" ALSO POSSIBLE: George R. R. Martin's "A Clash of Kings"

This title is clearer.

I'm currently reading "A Clash of Kings", the second book in George R.R.


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I'm currently reading "A Clash of Kings", the second book in George R.R. I'm currently reading "A Clash of Kings", the second book in George R.R.

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Martin's "A Song of Ice and Fire" series.


Martin's series "A Song of Ice and Fire" series. Martin's series "A Song of Ice and Fire".

Your original was fine too, but this sounds a bit more natural.

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The story is so intense that I want to quit my job so I can read it at home all day.


The story is so intense that I want to quit my job so I can read itstay at home and read it all day. The story is so intense that I want to quit my job so I can stay at home and read it all day.

The story is so intense that I want to quit my job so I can read itstay at home all daynd read it. The story is so intense that I want to quit my job so I can stay at home and read it.

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The story is so intenseengrossing that I want to quit my job so I can read it at home all day. The story is so engrossing that I want to quit my job so I can read it at home all day.

COMMENT: Perhaps "engrossing" (引人入胜的) is a better word choice than "intense."

I am at the last part of the book.


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I am atin the last part of the book. I am in the last part of the book.

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I am atALSO POSSIBLE: I have reached the last part of the book. ALSO POSSIBLE: I have reached the last part of the book.

I searched online and found out the series was planned to have seven volumes, but only five volumes have been published.


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I searched online and found out theat seriven volumes wasere planned to have seven volumin the series, but only five volumes have been published. I searched online and found out that seven volumes were planned in the series but only five volumes have been published.

I searched online and found out the series was planned to have seven volumebooks, but only five volumebooks have been published. I searched online and found out the series was planned to have seven books, but only five books have been published.

Your sentence was correct, but the word "volume" sound very formal. When my friends and I talked about Harry Potter, Game of Thrones, or other popular series, we'd always say things like "I'm reading the 5th book" or "I just finished book 6". I also think "published" also sounds a little strange compared to saying "only five books have come out" or "only five books have been released".

ALSO POSSIBLE: I searched online and found out the series was planned to have seven volumes, butoriginally seven volumes were planned, though only five volumes have been published so far. ALSO POSSIBLE: I searched online and found out originally seven volumes were planned, though only five volumes have been published so far.

And the last published one was 13 years ago, so I will probably have to wait forever...


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And the last published one was 13 years ago, so I will probably have to wait forever... And the last published one was 13 years ago, so I will probably have to wait forever...

We all feel this way :)

AndLSO POSSIBLE: Since the last volume published one was 13 years ago, so I will probably have to wait forever...probably no sequels will come. ALSO POSSIBLE: Since the last volume published one was 13 years ago, probably no sequels will come.

IDEA: Since a lot of money would come out if more volumes were published, perhaps more volume will someday appear. (The temptation to make more money is great.)

Nevertheless, good things are worth the wait.


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NHowevertheless, good things are worth the wait. However, good things are worth the wait.

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Nevertheless, good things are often worth the wait. Nevertheless, good things are often worth the wait.

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