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The weather today is very nice, I saw a man in a white shirt walking odown the street. The weather today is very nice, I saw a man in a white shirt walking down the street.

on the street is technically fine but no one really says that, it's much more natural to say walking 'down' the street

The weather today is very nice,. I saw a man in a white shirt walking on the street. The weather today is very nice. I saw a man in a white shirt walking on the street.

He iwas going to the shop. He was going to the shop

He iwas going to the shop. He was going to the shop.

You are recounting something that happened in the past

Hbecause he wantsed to buy a subject, and finsomething , and eventually he got oneit. because he wanted to buy something , and eventually he got it.

He wantsed to buy a subject, and finally he got one. He wanted to buy a subject, and finally he got one.

- wants is present tense should be past tense to fit with rest of story - subject is quite unclear, not sure what that is supposed to be