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May 3, 2022

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Pruning the trees

“We have to prune the trees in the garden.”

There were waist high trees named privet in my garden. Once I knew that there was a privet street in England as I read Harry Potter.

“The privet in this name of street means the privet tree in my garden? Or is any other meaning in there maybe?”

I imagined the street that privet trees are along the street.

“I’m going to cut the thick stems in the bush. Would you cut the upper branches with this pruning shears?”

“okay.”

We pruned the branches for about one to two hours. One side of the ground was slope that made us difficult to do our job.”

“I can’t handle my hands. They’re keep trembling.”

She said as she held out her hands after she finished her job.

“I know that feeling. You did a great job. Thank you.” I said.

After she entered the house I started to dig the drainway. It need annual reparing because of the rain. The soil fill in the ditch as it rains. And the fallen leaves as well. There are big oak trees right beside the gutter. Mass amount of leaves fall in Fall. I have to clean it up at least two times in a year. Today was the day. It was good to work since yet there were not mosquitos.

Luckily I didn't get blisters on my fingers like I got when I did it at first time. Now I need some sweets. I ran out of sugar.

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Pruning the trees

“We have to prune the trees in the garden.”

There were waist high trees namcalled privets in my garden.

OnceAs I once read Harry Potter, I knew that there was a pPrivet sStreet in England as I read Harry Potter.

“The privet in this name of street meanis the same as the privet tree in my garden?

Or maybe there is any other meaning in there maybe?”

I imagined that the street thatd privet trees are along the streeit.

“I’m going to cut the thick stems in the bush.

Would you cut the upper branches with thisese pruning shears?”

oOkay.”

We pruned the branches for about one to two hours.

One side of the ground was sloped, and that made usit difficult to do our job.”

“I can’t handle my hands.

They’re keep trembling,” she said as she held out her hands after she finished her job.

She said as she held out her hands after she finished her job.

This sentence has been corrected by combining it with the previous sentence.

“I know that feeling.

You did a great job.

Thank you.,” I said.

After she entered the house I started to dig into the drainway.

It needed annual repairing because of the rain.

The soil fillgathers in the ditch as it rains.

And tThe fallen leaves do as well.

There are big oak trees right beside the gutter.

Mass amount of leaves fall in Fall.

I have to clean it up at least two times in a year.

Today was the day.

It was a good day to work since yet there were not mosquitos.

Luckily I didn't get blisters on my fingers like I got when I did it athe first time.

Now I need some sweets.

I ran out of sugar.

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Great work! :D

There were waist high trees named privet trees in my garden.

Once I knew that there was a pPrivet sStreet in England as I had read Harry Potter.

TDoes the p'Privet' in this name of street meane street's name have the same meaning as the privet trees in my garden?

Or is any other meaning in maybe there's anothere maybeeaning?”

I imagined theat that street thatd privet trees are along the streeit.

“I’m going to cut the thick stems in the bushes.

Would you cut the upper branches with thisese pruning shears?”

oOkay.”

We pruned the branches for abroutnd one to two hours.

One side of the ground was a slope thatwhich made usit difficult to do our jobs.”

“I can’t handlecontrol my hands.

They’re keep trembling.,

Should be one sentence combined with the following.

Sshe said as she held out her hands after she finisheding her job.

Continuation of previous sentence.

Thank you.,” I said.

After she entered the house, I started to dig the drainway.

It needed annual repairing because of the rain.

The sSoil fill ins the ditch aswhen it rains.

And the fallen leaves as well.

Massive amounts of leaves fall in Fallautumn.

You could also use "the fall" if you don't want to use "autumn".

I have to clean it up at least two times in a year.

It was good to work now since yet there were notn't any mosquitos yet.

Luckily, I didn't get blisters on my fingers unlike I got when I did it at first timethe first time when I did this.

I ran out'm running low ofn sugar.

I'm assuming you mean sugar in your blood, because as it's written originally, it reads more like you were out of the kind of sugar you'd find in a kitchen.

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b230tri

May 3, 2022

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Thanks. I need more practice.

Pruning the trees


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“We have to prune the trees in the garden.”


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There were waist high trees named privet in my garden.


There were waist high trees named privet trees in my garden.

There were waist high trees namcalled privets in my garden.

Once I knew that there was a privet street in England as I read Harry Potter.


Once I knew that there was a pPrivet sStreet in England as I had read Harry Potter.

OnceAs I once read Harry Potter, I knew that there was a pPrivet sStreet in England as I read Harry Potter.

“The privet in this name of street means the privet tree in my garden?


TDoes the p'Privet' in this name of street meane street's name have the same meaning as the privet trees in my garden?

“The privet in this name of street meanis the same as the privet tree in my garden?

Or is any other meaning in there maybe?”


Or is any other meaning in maybe there's anothere maybeeaning?”

Or maybe there is any other meaning in there maybe?”

I imagined the street that privet trees are along the street.


I imagined theat that street thatd privet trees are along the streeit.

I imagined that the street thatd privet trees are along the streeit.

“I’m going to cut the thick stems in the bush.


“I’m going to cut the thick stems in the bushes.

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Would you cut the upper branches with this pruning shears?”


Would you cut the upper branches with thisese pruning shears?”

Would you cut the upper branches with thisese pruning shears?”

“okay.”


oOkay.”

oOkay.”

We pruned the branches for about one to two hours.


We pruned the branches for abroutnd one to two hours.

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One side of the ground was slope that made us difficult to do our job.”


One side of the ground was a slope thatwhich made usit difficult to do our jobs.”

One side of the ground was sloped, and that made usit difficult to do our job.”

“I can’t handle my hands.


“I can’t handlecontrol my hands.

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They’re keep trembling.”


They’re keep trembling.,

Should be one sentence combined with the following.

They’re keep trembling,” she said as she held out her hands after she finished her job.

She said as she held out her hands after she finished her job.


Sshe said as she held out her hands after she finisheding her job.

Continuation of previous sentence.

She said as she held out her hands after she finished her job.

This sentence has been corrected by combining it with the previous sentence.

“I know that feeling.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

You did a great job.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Thank you.” I said.


Thank you.,” I said.

Thank you.,” I said.

After she entered the house I started to dig the drainway.


After she entered the house, I started to dig the drainway.

After she entered the house I started to dig into the drainway.

It need annual reparing because of the rain.


It needed annual repairing because of the rain.

It needed annual repairing because of the rain.

The soil fill in the ditch as it rains.


The sSoil fill ins the ditch aswhen it rains.

The soil fillgathers in the ditch as it rains.

And the fallen leaves as well.


And the fallen leaves as well.

And tThe fallen leaves do as well.

There are big oak trees right beside the gutter.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Mass amount of leaves fall in Fall.


Massive amounts of leaves fall in Fallautumn.

You could also use "the fall" if you don't want to use "autumn".

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have to clean it up at least two times in a year.


I have to clean it up at least two times in a year.

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Today was the day.


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It was good to work since yet there were not mosquitos.


It was good to work now since yet there were notn't any mosquitos yet.

It was a good day to work since yet there were not mosquitos.

Luckily I didn't get blisters on my fingers like I got when I did it at first time.


Luckily, I didn't get blisters on my fingers unlike I got when I did it at first timethe first time when I did this.

Luckily I didn't get blisters on my fingers like I got when I did it athe first time.

Now I need some sweets.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I ran out of sugar.


I ran out'm running low ofn sugar.

I'm assuming you mean sugar in your blood, because as it's written originally, it reads more like you were out of the kind of sugar you'd find in a kitchen.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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