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July 22, 2020

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Pros and Cons for Studying Abroad

In the modern education, more and more students enroll to study abroad programmes, which has become affordable for a greater number of people with different social backgrounds. In this essay, I will review some pros and cons of this new trend in education.
The first point for pros is acquiring a better qualification. Universities in more developed countries with a rich tradition of higher education providing best study courses to students. That kind of education consequently opens more opportunities for them in future to build more prestigious careers.
New experience might be as important as better education. For young people from developing countries, overseas education in Europe, the USA, Australia, China or Japan will bring more knowledge about the world, expanding their opinions of how social institutes should work. For some of them, it might be a reason to think and start changes for the better in their own countries.
There are also some cons that should be discusses. One of them is the cost of overseas education. For developing countries, it might be far more expensive, forcing students or their parents take out loans to pay tuition fees. However, on the other hand, there are numbers of scholarships that could potentially help with payment of students with higher grades.
To summarize, I think that with growing opportunities and higher demands for employees in the world, searching for the best education is reasonable for many people. Study abroad programmes is a chance to change people’s lives and build a better future for themselves and their homelands. Developing countries in the world look with a hope on people willing to acquire highly-valued education, bringing prosperity and balance to their societies.


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In the modern educational environment, more and more students enroll to study abroad programmes, which has become affordable for a greater number of people with different social backgrounds.

I'm not sure if you're using British or American English, but "programs" is American English and "programmes" is British English.

The first point for pros ispro is that a student can acquiring ae better qualifications.

Universities in more developed countries with a rich tradition of higher education providinge the best study courses tofor their students.

New experiences might be as important as better education.

For young people from developing countries, overseas education in Europe, the USA, Australia, China or Japan willcan bring more knowledge about the world, expanding their opinions of how social institutes should work.

For some of them, it might be a reason to think andbout starting changes for the better in their own countries.

There are also some cons that should be discussesd.

For students from developing countries, itstudying abroad might be far moretoo expensive, forcing students or their parents take out loans to pay tuition fees.

However, on the other hand, there are numbers ofthere are several scholarships that could potentially help with payment of students with higher grades to pay tuition.

To summarize, I think that with growing opportunities and higher demands for employees in the world, searching for the best education is reasonable for many people.

Study abroad programmes iss are a chance to change people’s lives and to build a better future for themselves and their homelands.

Developing countries in the world look with a hope hopefully upon people willing to acquire highly-valued education, bringand to bring prosperity and balance to their societies.

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Very well written. Overall, I'd rate it about 6-7.

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SteppeBrother

July 23, 2020

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Fair grade. :D Thank you!

In the modern educational environment, more and more students enroll toin study abroad programmes, which hasve become affordable for a greater number of people withfrom different social backgrounds.

In this essay, I will review some pros and cons of this new trend in education.

The first point for pros is acquiring a better qualifications.

Universities in more developed countries with a rich traditions of higher education providinge the best study courses to their students.

That kind of education consequently opens more opportunities for them in the future to build more prestigious careers.

For young people from developing countries, overseas education in Europe, the USA, Australia, China or Japan willcan bring more knowledge about the world, and expanding their opinions of how social instituteions should work.

One of them is the cost of overseas education.

Pros and Cons for Studying Abroad


In the modern education, more and more students enroll to study abroad programmes, which has become affordable for a greater number of people with different social backgrounds.


In the modern educational environment, more and more students enroll toin study abroad programmes, which hasve become affordable for a greater number of people withfrom different social backgrounds.

In the modern educational environment, more and more students enroll to study abroad programmes, which has become affordable for a greater number of people with different social backgrounds.

I'm not sure if you're using British or American English, but "programs" is American English and "programmes" is British English.

In this essay, I will review some pros and cons of this new trend in education.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The first point for pros is acquiring a better qualification.


The first point for pros is acquiring a better qualifications.

The first point for pros ispro is that a student can acquiring ae better qualifications.

Universities in more developed countries with a rich tradition of higher education providing best study courses to students.


Universities in more developed countries with a rich traditions of higher education providinge the best study courses to their students.

Universities in more developed countries with a rich tradition of higher education providinge the best study courses tofor their students.

That kind of education consequently opens more opportunities for them in future to build more prestigious careers.


That kind of education consequently opens more opportunities for them in the future to build more prestigious careers.

New experience might be as important as better education.


New experiences might be as important as better education.

For young people from developing countries, overseas education in Europe, the USA, Australia, China or Japan will bring more knowledge about the world, expanding their opinions of how social institutes should work.


For young people from developing countries, overseas education in Europe, the USA, Australia, China or Japan willcan bring more knowledge about the world, and expanding their opinions of how social instituteions should work.

For young people from developing countries, overseas education in Europe, the USA, Australia, China or Japan willcan bring more knowledge about the world, expanding their opinions of how social institutes should work.

For some of them, it might be a reason to think and start changes for the better in their own countries.


For some of them, it might be a reason to think andbout starting changes for the better in their own countries.

There are also some cons that should be discusses.


There are also some cons that should be discussesd.

One of them is the cost of overseas education.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

For developing countries, it might be far more expensive, forcing students or their parents take out loans to pay tuition fees.


For students from developing countries, itstudying abroad might be far moretoo expensive, forcing students or their parents take out loans to pay tuition fees.

However, on the other hand, there are numbers of scholarships that could potentially help with payment of students with higher grades.


However, on the other hand, there are numbers ofthere are several scholarships that could potentially help with payment of students with higher grades to pay tuition.

To summarize, I think that with growing opportunities and higher demands for employees in the world, searching for the best education is reasonable for many people.


To summarize, I think that with growing opportunities and higher demands for employees in the world, searching for the best education is reasonable for many people.

Study abroad programmes is a chance to change people’s lives and build a better future for themselves and their homelands.


Study abroad programmes iss are a chance to change people’s lives and to build a better future for themselves and their homelands.

Developing countries in the world look with a hope on people willing to acquire highly-valued education, bringing prosperity and balance to their societies.


Developing countries in the world look with a hope hopefully upon people willing to acquire highly-valued education, bringand to bring prosperity and balance to their societies.

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