Oct. 22, 2024
Pros and Cons at This Stage
-- Please don't question me about the numbers and resources like last time when I wrote something to do with my work. This is just an English writing exercise, not a thesis or a presentation.--
From 2016 to 2023, e-commerce transactions grew at an average annual rate of 10.0% in China. The share of e-commerce in the women's clothing retail market is particularly remarkable. It was said that if you don't know e-commerce, then you don't need to do business in the women's clothing industry
Now things are changing in this industry.
A few well-known brands that used to be good at e-commerce closed recently. The increase for most brands seemed to be becoming difficult.
As I mentioned in the title, there are pros and cons at this stage.
To be continued...
--请不要像上次一样，质疑数字和资源。这只是一个英语写作练习，不是论文或报告--
2016年至2023年，中国电子商务交易额年均增长10.0%。电子商务在女装零售市场中所占的份额尤为显著。有人说，如果你不懂电子商务，那么你就别在女装行业做生意。
现在这个行业的情况正在发生变化。
一些曾经擅长电商的知名品牌最近倒闭了。大多数品牌的增长似乎变得越来越困难。
正如我在标题中提到的，这个阶段有利有弊。
待续……
-- Please don't question me about the numbers and resources like last time when I wrote something to do with my work.
This sentence is correct if you are referring to your previous entry. If the entry you are referring to was a while before that, you would say "...like the last time I wrote something..."
This is just an English writing exercise, not a thesis or a presentation.-- From 2016 to 2023, e-commerce transactions grew at an average annual rate of 10.0% in China.
The share of e-commerce in the women's clothing retail market is particularly remarkable.
It was said that if you don't know e-commerce, then you don't need toshouldn't do business in the women's clothing industry.
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Now things are changing in this industry.
It's a bit more natural without repeating "industry".
A few well-known brands that used to be good at e-commerce closed recently.
The increaseGrowth for most brands seemed to be becoming difficult.
As I mentioned in the title, there are pros and cons at this stage.
I'm not sure pros and cons is quite right here. Maybe the phrase "a mixed bag" is more apt. E.g. "As I mentioned in the title, this industry is a mixed bag at this stage."
To be continued...
Oct. 23, 2024
Thanks a lot!
Have a nice day!
-- Please don't question me about the numbers and resources like the last time when I wrote something {to do with | about} my work.
This is just an English writing exercise, not a thesis or a presentation.-- From 2016 to 2023, e-commerce transactions grew at an average annual rate of 10.0% in China.
The share of e-commerce in the women's clothing retail market is particularly remarkable.
It {was | has been} said that if you don't know e-commerce, then you don't need toshouldn’t do business in the women's clothing industry.
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Now things are changing in this industry.
I’ve corrected this to match the meaning of “那么你就别在女装行业做生意”.
A few well-known brands that used to be good at e-commerce closedwent out of business recently.
I don’t think we usually say that a “brand” closes. A business, store or website can “close”, though.
The increase fFor most brands, growth seemeds to be becoming difficult.
suggestion: Most brands seem to be struggling to grow.
As I mentioned in the title, there are [pros and cons] at this stage.
I’m not sure that “pros and cons” is correct. It depends on the context. Pros and cons are typically “the various arguments in favour of and against a motion, course of action, etc.”
https://www.wordreference.com/definition/pros%20and%20cons
Oct. 23, 2024
Thanks a lot!
Have a nice day!
Pros and Cons at This Stage
-- Please don't question me about the numbers and resources like last time when I wrote something to do with my work. (or [...] regarding my work.)
This is just an English writing exercise, not a thesis or a presentation.-- From 2016 to 2023, e-commerce transactions grew at an average annual rate of 10.0% in China.
The share of e-commerce in the women's clothing retail market is particularly remarkable.
It was said that if you don't know e-commerce, then you don't need to do business in the women's clothing industry.
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Now things are changing in this industry.
A few well-known brands that used to be good at e-commerce closed recently.
It may be more clear to say "[...] brands that used to perform well through e-commerce [...]".
The increase for most brands seemed to be becoming difficult.
As I mentioned in the title, there are pros and cons at this stage.
To be continued...
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It was said that if you don't know e-commerce, then you don't need to do business in the women's clothing industry Now things are changing in this industry. It was said that if you don't know e-commerce, then you don't need to do business in the women's clothing industry. It {was | has been} said that if you don't know e-commerce, then you I’ve corrected this to match the meaning of “那么你就别在女装行业做生意”. It was said that if you don't know e-commerce, then you It's a bit more natural without repeating "industry". |
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The increase for most brands seemed to be becoming difficult. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
suggestion: Most brands seem to be struggling to grow.
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