May 1, 2023
Proposal for the creation of a local communitary center
Introduction and reasons for the project
There is a neighbourhood in the south of Seville called „3000 viviendas“. It is not renown a place positively in the city, so as to life there. It is commonly associated to drug use, prostitution and crimes. Although that is not entirely true, it would be necessary to cooperate in this location, particularly, in order to prevent childhood from following the wrong path. In this regard, it is an interesting idea the creation of a center, where it could take place any sort of healthy activities in a controllable environment.
Activities and benefits from the project
The center could be split into two areas: one for leisure activities and another linked to academic and professional purposes.
- Leisure: It is recommendable to place a big room where children and young could socialize and have fun, for instance, playing billiar, watching movies or even reading. That could help them to realise there is a different positive reality far beyond what they are accustomed to see.
- Studies and orientation: this room could be similar to a class where volunteers help students from this part of the city to pass their exams or get higher scores, with the aim of gaining access to better scholarships. Furthermore, we could offer professional orientation services for those who are still, in order to discover what is their vocation.
Conclusions
This project would require funds so as to build the center, though after this initial contribution, the project would be in charge of volunteers and some social workers (whose salaries could come from public institutions). Your company’s contribution could significantly improve the life of childhood and youth in this neighbourhood, not to mention indirect effects in their families.
An international business often pays for projects to support families in different countries,
for example they may pay for a child's education.
You decide to write a proposal to the company to suggest a project. In your proposal you
should outline the kind of project that you think would be suitable and explain the benefits for
families.
Write your proposal.
Proposal for the creation of a local communitary center
Introduction and reasons for the project
There is a neighbourhood in the south of Seville called „"3000 viviendas“.
It is not renown a place positively in the city, so as to life thers reputation in the city is not positive.
It is commonly associated towith drug use, prostitution and, crimes.
Although that is not entirely true, it would be necessary to cooperate in this location, particularly, in order to prevent childhoodren from following the wrong path.
Cooperate with whom?
In this regard, it is an interesting idea the creation of a center, where it could take placthe creation of a center is an interesting idea, where any sort of healthy activities can take place in a controllabled environment.
Activities and benefits from the project
Incomplete sentence.
The center could be split into two areas: one for leisure activities and another linked tofor academic and professional purposes.
- Leisure: It is recommendabled to place a big room where children and youngth could socialize and have fun, for instance, playing billiards, watching movies or even reading.
Previously you used British spelling in "neighbourhood" and now you are using American spelling in "socialize". You should stick to one spelling.
That could help them to realise there is a different positive reality far beyond what they are accustomed to seeing.
- Studies and orientation: this room could be similar to a class where volunteers help students from this part of the city to pass their exams or get higher scores, with the aim of gaining access to better scholarships.
Furthermore, we could offer professional orientation services for those who are still, in order to discover what is their vocation is.
Those who are still what?
Conclusions
This project would require funds so as to build the center, though after this initial contribution, the project would be in charge of volunteers and some social workers (whose salaries could come from public institutions).
Your company’s contribution could significantly improve the lifeves of childhoodren and youth in this neighbourhood, not to mention any possible indirect effects in their families.
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There is a neighbourhood in the south of Seville called „3000 viviendas“. There is a neighbourhood in the south of Seville called |
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It is not renown a place positively in the city, so as to life there. It |
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It is commonly associated to drug use, prostitution and crimes. It is commonly associated |
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Although that is not entirely true, it would be necessary to cooperate in this location, particularly, in order to prevent childhood from following the wrong path. Although that is not entirely true, it would be necessary to cooperate in this location, Cooperate with whom? |
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In this regard, it is an interesting idea the creation of a center, where it could take place any sort of healthy activities in a controllable environment. In this regard, |
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Activities and benefits from the project Activities and benefits from the project Incomplete sentence. |
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The center could be split into two areas: one for leisure activities and another linked to academic and professional purposes. The center could be split into two areas: one for leisure activities and another |
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- Leisure: It is recommendable to place a big room where children and young could socialize and have fun, for instance, playing billiar, watching movies or even reading. - Leisure: It is recommend Previously you used British spelling in "neighbourhood" and now you are using American spelling in "socialize". You should stick to one spelling. |
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That could help them to realise there is a different positive reality far beyond what they are accustomed to see. That could help them |
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- Studies and orientation: this room could be similar to a class where volunteers help students from this part of the city to pass their exams or get higher scores, with the aim of gaining access to better scholarships. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Furthermore, we could offer professional orientation services for those who are still, in order to discover what is their vocation. Furthermore, we could offer professional orientation services for those who are still, in order to discover what Those who are still what? |
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Conclusions This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This project would require funds so as to build the center, though after this initial contribution, the project would be in charge of volunteers and some social workers (whose salaries could come from public institutions). This project would require funds |
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Your company’s contribution could significantly improve the life of childhood and youth in this neighbourhood, not to mention indirect effects in their families. Your company’s contribution could significantly improve the li |
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