March 28, 2022
This year We have so many new students at the college and as the senior student I am , I'm writing this card to get to know that the website has to become better.
First, the website doesn´t give you the hour of entrance to the university or the timetable so the first days the people come late and doesn't know which books to carry until the teacher gets them to know.
To continue, The website doesn't show the extra curricular table of the college activities so if any student is accustomed to do an specific sport they don't know they have the chance to do it and they will have to go to a private sport team.
Secondly, they used to publish all our projects and give us the chance to see our evaluation marks on the website by putting our email and password now they don't post anything in the evaluation marks table has a bug because the marks aren't shown as you can see the website has lots of drawbacks in I think that it's the time to start upgrading it .
As an advice first if I were you I would start having a look and solving the marks issue and then I will finish with the other problems by adding timetable with every class days in classes of every hour in put in all the extra curricular activities that you can do. To sum up I hope you will take into account my advices and you change the website
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First, the website doesn´t give you the hour of entrance to the university or the timetable so the first days the people come late and doesn't know which books to carry until the teacher glets them to know.
To sum up I hope you will take into account my advices and you change the website
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Hi! I've made a couple of changes throughout, mainly its stylistic changes just to make it sound more native, and occasionally help with little sayings and phrases. Happy to talk through any questions you might have :)
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This year. |
We have so many new students at the college and |
the seniors student I am . |
I'm writing this card to get to know that the website has to become better. |
First, the website doesn´t give you the hour of entrance to the university or the timetable so the first days the people come late and doesn't know which books to carry until the teacher gets them to know. First, the website doesn´t give you the hour of entrance to the university or First, the website doesn´t give you the hour of entrance to the university or the timetable so the first days the people come late and doesn't know which books to carry until the teacher |
To continue, The website doesn't show the extra curricular table of the college activities so if any student is accustomed to do an specific sport they don't know they have the chance to do it and they will have to go to a private sport team. To continue, |
Secondly, they used to publish all our projects and give us the chance to see our evaluation marks on the website by putting our email and password now they don't post anything in the evaluation marks table has a bug because the marks aren't shown as you can see the website has lots of drawbacks in I think that it's the time to start upgrading it . Secondly, they used to publish all of our projects and give us the chance to see our evaluation marks on the website by imputting our email and password. However, now they don't post anything in the evaluation marks table which has a bug because the marks aren't shown |
As an advice first if I were you I would start having a look and solving the marks issue and then I will finish with the other problems by adding timetable with every class days in classes of every hour in put in all the extra curricular activities that you can do.
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