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Scarlett_Father

Nov. 7, 2023

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Proponents and Opponents

The conflict between Israel and Palestine is ongoing. The Israeli army has been bombing the Gaza Strip for several weeks. Proponents contend that it's an acceptable and necessary means to demolish terrorists, while opponents contend it is severe inhumane behavior.

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Proponents and Opponents

The conflict between Israel and Palestine is ongoing.

The Israeli army has been bombing the Gaza Strip for several weeks.

Proponents contend that it's an acceptable and necessary means to demolishstroy terrorists, while opponents contend it is severely inhumane behavior.

alternatives:
- severe, inhumane behavior
- severe and inhumane behavior

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Scarlett_Father

Nov. 8, 2023

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Yes, need an adverb here. Thank you!

Proponents and Opponents

The conflict between Israel and Palestine is ongoing.

The Israeli army has been bombing the Gaza Strip for several weeks.

Proponents contend that it's an acceptable and necessary means to demolishstroy terrorists, while opponents contend it is severe inhumane behavior.

Demolish buildings, bridges, dams, etc.

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Scarlett_Father

Nov. 7, 2023

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Thank you for your quick correction!

Proponents and Opponents


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The conflict between Israel and Palestine is ongoing.


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The Israeli army has been bombing the Gaza Strip for several weeks.


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Proponents contend that it's an acceptable and necessary means to demolish terrorists, while opponents contend it is severe inhumane behavior.


Proponents contend that it's an acceptable and necessary means to demolishstroy terrorists, while opponents contend it is severe inhumane behavior.

Demolish buildings, bridges, dams, etc.

Proponents contend that it's an acceptable and necessary means to demolishstroy terrorists, while opponents contend it is severely inhumane behavior.

alternatives: - severe, inhumane behavior - severe and inhumane behavior

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