Prometheus

sho

March 28, 2023

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Prometheus

Summary Comments

In short, that God was a dick.

Ratings
8.5⭐︎ /10

Review

I understand that the more you like the Alien series, the more you will hate this movie, but I don't, so I love this movie. In a nutshell, this movie is about God being a dick. It is a common idea that the creator of mankind was actually a highly evolved alien, but this movie is a little different. Why does the fact that he is the creator of the human race mean that he is as good as God? What guarantee do we have that they are someone we can talk to in the first place? We can't talk to the creatures that mankind has created by artificially breeding animals like God. And many people do not see their lives as equal to mankind's. That is why what is depicted in this film is so resonating with me. I also liked the way the engineers were portrayed as David-like, like the sculptures that Western civilization has looked up to, with their god-like presence.
I liked the next film, Covenant, but I like this one better.
I really want to see the third one.

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Corrections

mari

Prometheus

I'd like to speak English naturally, and not like a textbook, so please correct me as accurately as possible so that I can speak like a native!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

Prometheus

Summary Comments

In short, that God was a dick.

Ratings

8.5⭐︎ /10

Review

I understand that the more you like the Alien series, the more you will hate this movie, but, I don't, so I love this movie.

In a nutshell, this movie is about God being a dick.

It is a common idea that the creator of mankind was actually a highly evolved alien, but this movie is a little different.

Why does the fact that he is the creator of the human race mean that he is as good as God?

What guarantee do we have that they are someone we can talk to in the first place?

We can't talk to the creatures that mankind has created by artificially breeding animals like God.

And many people do not see their lives as equal to mankind's.

That is why what is depicted in this film ~~is so~~ resonat~~ing~~es so much with me.

I also liked the way the engineers were portrayed as David-like, like the sculptures that Western civilization has looked up to, with their god-like presence.

I liked the next film, Covenant, but I like this one better.

I really want to see the third one.

Feedback

上手に書けています！

sho

March 31, 2023

ありがとうございます！！

eqeos

Summary ~~Comments~~

In slang, you can also write TLDR (too long; didn't read). This is usually then put at the end of a post.

In short, that God was a dick.

Perfect. This is a very native like use of humor.

I ~~understand~~t seems that the general consensus is that the more you like the Alien series~~, the more you will hate this movie, but I don't, so I love~~ (the franchise that Prometheus is in), the more you will hate this movie. But since I'm not that much of an Alien fan, I ended up loving thise movie.

In a nutshell, this movie is about God being a dick.

It is a common idea that the creator of mankind was actually a highly evolved alien, but this movie is a little different.

Why does the fact that he is the creator of the human race mean that he is as good as God?

What guarantee do we have that they are someone we can talk to in the first place?

We can't talk to the creatures that mankind has created by artificially breeding animals like God.

I'm not sure what you want to say here.

A(previous sentence)...,and many people do not see their lives as equal to mankind's.

OR Many people do not see their lives as equal to mankind's.

Again, not sure what you want to say here.

Th~~at is~~e whay ~~what is depicted in~~the film represented mankind was why thise film ~~is so~~ resonat~~ing~~ed so much with me.

I also liked the way the engineers were portrayed as David-like, like the sculptures that Western civilization has looked up to, with their god-like presence.

I liked the next film, Covenant, but I like this one better/(even more).

I really want to see the third one/installment.

sho

March 29, 2023

We can't talk to the creatures that mankind has created by artificially breeding animals like God.

How's this?🤔

Even if we, like God, create clones of sheep, we can't talk to them, and many people would not see the value of their life is the same as ours.

eqeos

March 29, 2023

How's this?🤔 Even if we, like God, create clones of sheep, we can't talk to them, and many people would not see the value of their life is the same as ours.

I'm still not entirely sure what you want to say is, but taking into account the previous sentence, I would write along the lines of this:

"It's not like we can talk to the animals that we breed even though to those animals, in a sense, we are their gods."

If this is off the mark, please let me know!

sho

March 29, 2023

I'm still not entirely sure what you want to say is, but taking into account the previous sentence, I would write along the lines of this: "It's not like we can talk to the animals that we breed even though to those animals, in a sense, we are their gods." If this is off the mark, please let me know!

I made it a short sentence because I can't explain that well. How about this one?

To God we are the same as the animals we treat so badly.

eqeos

March 29, 2023

I made it a short sentence because I can't explain that well. How about this one? To God we are the same as the animals we treat so badly.

Yeah, that sounds good! I'm not sure if this is what the original sentence was meant to be or not though.

sho

March 31, 2023

Yeah, that sounds good! I'm not sure if this is what the original sentence was meant to be or not though.

Haha okay! Thank you so much!!

Prometheus