Feb. 18, 2021
Product vs Parts Which is expensive?
I have a bicycle indication light.
Actually, it was from my friend, he gave me for free.
No need to thank him.
Because I have checked in internet the cheapest price can lower as US$2.00.
Anyway, after almost one year by now.
The battery was drain out it is a round shape like a coin size.
So, I go to the local shops to buy new battery.
Can you guess the price for one single battery?
US$2.00!
I told my friend about that.
He laughed at me and said I must live in the stone age.
Because people in this generation will never to go “shops” to buy any things.
Poor old man!
Product vs Parts Which is expensive?
I have a bicycle indication light.
If you mean a light so people can see you when you cycle, then a bicycle light. If you mean a light to flash when you are going to turn, then a bicycle turn light or a bicycle turn indicator light.
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NThere was no need to thank him.
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He laughed at me and said I must live in the sStone aAge.
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Because people in this generation will never to go “shops” to buy any things.
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Poor old man!
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I have a bicycle indication light. I have a bicycle If you mean a light so people can see you when you cycle, then a bicycle light. If you mean a light to flash when you are going to turn, then a bicycle turn light or a bicycle turn indicator light. |
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Actually, it was from my friend, he gave me for free. Actually, it was from my friend |
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No need to thank him.
Your version would be fine in spoken English, but because it lacks a main verb, it is incomplete in written English. |
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Because I have checked in internet the cheapest price can lower as US$2.00.
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Anyway, after almost one year by now. Anyway, after almost |
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The battery was drain out it is a round shape like a coin size.
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So, I go to the local shops to buy new battery. So, I go to the local shops to buy a new battery. |
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Can you guess the price for one single battery? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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US$2.00! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I told my friend about that. I told my friend about th |
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He laughed at me and said I must live in the stone age. He laughed at me and said I must live in the Capitalization |
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Because people in this generation will never to go “shops” to buy any things. Because people in this generation will never to go “shops” to buy or "... to buy anything." |
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Poor old man! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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