Problems with the aApartment

Dear Sir, ¶
I am renting a home from your agency and now, I would like to mentiondisclose to you some problems, which I noticed the other day.

For aTo start, the air conditioning is broken, so I cannot keep calm the roomsthe apartment cool.

There are many ways to start this sentence. "To start" seems more natural to me. The other corrections are grammatical.

Additionally, I did not getreceive the key for the balcony door as well as. Also, the faucet in the bathroom the faucet is dripping, whatich is quite unpleasant, especially at night.

Finally, the most significant problem is for me is that the intercom is faulty.

It means serious complaintThis is a serious problem for me, because I do cannot work on my project without ithis.

What project involves an intercom? This is unclear to me, the reader.

I have already connectedbeen in contact with you for a couple of weeks and we have talked about the details of the apartment.

Not sure the meaning here. Did you talk to the agent a few week ago? About the issues mentioned in this message or other issues?

But you did not mention that these problems existed.

I think this is your meaning.

I would be grateful if you wcould solve these things as soon as possible.

At theThis weekend I have to travel, so I will not available for the next five days.

Problems with the aApartment

For a start, air conditioning is broken, so I cannot keep calmool in the rooms.

Additionally, I did not get the key for the balcony door as well as in. In term of the bathroom, the faucet is dripping, whatich is quite unpleasant especially at night.

Finally, the most significant problem is for me is that the intercom is faulty.

It meansThis is a serious complaint for me, because I do cannot work on my project without this.

I have already connetacted you for a couple of weeks and we have talked aboutgo and had discussed the details.

ButHowever, you did not mention these problems.

I would be grateful if you wcould solve these things as soon as possible.

At theThis weekend I will have to travel, so I will not be available for five days.

Yours faithfully, ¶
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Leila Zett

"Yours faithfully", a British closing - I learned something new!