April 29, 2022
Problems of the modern zoo
Theme: Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed. What problems do zoos bring?
What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed?
Currently, great deal of people believe that zoos have no purpose in today's world. So let us weigh pros and cons of zoos and consider the problem of the zoos. Long story short, zoos has the problem regarding rights of the animals. Alternatives to zoos will be facility that has the ability to protect animals facing the danger of extinction.
As I mentioned above, zoos in modern world has a problem of rights of the animals. For example, Finland approved the legislation about the rights of monkey and other human-like mammals. The motivation for this legislation is very simple that human-like animals has high intelligence, and they can feel a stress by restricted. That can count us problem of the zoos.
Another example for problem is stress of the animals. Some animals feels really bad to be watched by people, and living in a restricted place. Because of this, some of them will not be able to make offspring.
However, some pros of zoos can not be overlooked. Protection of the animals, for instance. Considerable number of animals facing the danger of extinction. Zoos is a good home for them. Compared with the wild situation, they can live safety, easy to get foods, no need to care about a natural enemy.
As I mentioned before, we need to preserve animals that facing extinction. That's why we need a facility to protect animals. Zoos playing important role as that kind of facility. But zoos in nowadays has problems like rights of the animals and stress of the animals.
In conclusion, Zoos has some problems over both physical and mental health of the animals. Facility that can protect animals from extinction can be said as alternatives to the zoos if they are closed.
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Problems of the modern zoo
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Theme: Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed.
What problems do zoos bring?
What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed?
Currently, a great deal of people believe that zoos have no purpose in today's world.
So let us weigh the pros and cons of zoos and consider the problem of the zoos.
Long story short, zoos has theve a problem regarding the rights of the animals.
Alternatives to zoos will be facilityies that hasve the ability to protect animals facing the danger of extinction.
As I mentioned above, zoos in the modern world hasve a problem ofconcerning the rights of the animals.
For example, Finland approved the legislation about the rights of monkeys and other human-like mammals.
The motivation for this legislation is very simple; that human-like animals hasve high intelligence, and they can feel a little stressed by being restricted.
That can count us problem of the zoos.
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Another example forof a problem isconcerning zoos is the stress of the animals.
I wrote "concerning zoos" just so the topic is still clear to the reader, but I don't think you need it.
Some animals feels really bad to bebeing watched by people, and living in a restricted places.
Because of this, some of them will not be able to make offspring.
However, some pros of zoos can not be overlooked.
Protection of the animals, for instance.
CA considerable number of animals facinge the danger of extinction.
Zoos isare a good home for them.
Compared with the wild situation, they can live safetly, easy toily get foods, and have no need to care about a natural enemy.
You can just say "the wild" to mean the natural habitat that animals live in.
As I mentioned before, we need to preserve animals that facinge extinction.
That's why we need a facilityies to protect animals.
Zoos playing an important role as that kind of facility.
But zoos in nowadays hasve problems like the rights of the animals and stress of the animals.
You can also say "the rights and stress of the animals" to make the sentence shorter.
In conclusion, Zzoos hasve some problems over both the physical and mental health of the animals.
Facilityies that can protect animals from extinction can be saidthought of as alternatives to the zoos if they are closed.
April 29, 2022
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Problems of the modern zoo Problems of the modern zoo I don't think this is wrong, but you can also say "Problems of modern zoos" |
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Theme: Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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What problems do zoos bring? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Currently, great deal of people believe that zoos have no purpose in today's world. Currently, a great deal of people believe that zoos have no purpose in today's world. |
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So let us weigh pros and cons of zoos and consider the problem of the zoos. So let us weigh the pros and cons of zoos and consider the problem of |
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Long story short, zoos has the problem regarding rights of the animals. Long story short, zoos ha |
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Alternatives to zoos will be facility that has the ability to protect animals facing the danger of extinction. Alternatives to zoos will be facilit |
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As I mentioned above, zoos in modern world has a problem of rights of the animals. As I mentioned above, zoos in the modern world ha |
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For example, Finland approved the legislation about the rights of monkey and other human-like mammals. For example, Finland approved |
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The motivation for this legislation is very simple that human-like animals has high intelligence, and they can feel a stress by restricted. The motivation for this legislation is very simple; that human-like animals ha |
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That can count us problem of the zoos. That can count us problem of the zoos. I feel this sentence feels a little unnatural, but I'm not sure what you're trying to say here. |
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Another example for problem is stress of the animals. Another example I wrote "concerning zoos" just so the topic is still clear to the reader, but I don't think you need it. |
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Some animals feels really bad to be watched by people, and living in a restricted place. Some animals feel |
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Because of this, some of them will not be able to make offspring. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, some pros of zoos can not be overlooked. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Protection of the animals, for instance. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Considerable number of animals facing the danger of extinction.
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Zoos is a good home for them. Zoos |
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Compared with the wild situation, they can live safety, easy to get foods, no need to care about a natural enemy. Compared with the wild You can just say "the wild" to mean the natural habitat that animals live in. |
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As I mentioned before, we need to preserve animals that facing extinction. As I mentioned before, we need to preserve animals that fac |
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That's why we need a facility to protect animals. That's why we need |
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Zoos playing important role as that kind of facility. Zoos play |
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But zoos in nowadays has problems like rights of the animals and stress of the animals. But zoos You can also say "the rights and stress of the animals" to make the sentence shorter. |
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In conclusion, Zoos has some problems over both physical and mental health of the animals. In conclusion, |
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Facility that can protect animals from extinction can be said as alternatives to the zoos if they are closed. Facilit |
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