Oct. 25, 2022
Problem With the Sound
Sincerily, I prefer to watch the films at home. In spain, the sound in the cinema is loud. If people listen music, and the special effects in a very strong sound level, they can get problems in their audition. Now I don't go to the cinema, it's a pity because always I liked to see the movies in the big screen.
Sincerily, I prefer to watch the films at home.
“Sincerely" is a bit too formal. If you're talking about films in general, no need for "the" if you're not talking about a some specific films.
In sSpain, the sound in the cinema is loud.
Country names are capitalized. I can only speak for American English, but we would say "the movies" and not "the cinema"- though going to the cinema might be more of a British English thing?
If people are listening to music, and the special effects in a very strong sound level, they can get problems in their auditionare loud, they can have hearing problems.
"Audition" is not used to describe hearing. This word is used to describe things like doing a musical performance to get into an orchestra.
Now I don't go to the cinema, anymore. it's a pity because always I liked to see the movies ion the big screen.
Prepositions are tricky- I'd look up the difference between "in" and "on"
Problem Wwith the Sound
Don’t have to capitalize prepositions in title.
Sincerily, I prefer to watch the films at home.
No need for “sincerely.” Unless the reader had a reason to think you liked theater movies more.
In sSpain, the sound in the cinema is loud.
If people listen to loud music, and theloud special effects in a very strong sound levelat the movies, they can get problems inwith their auditionhearing.
Not sure how the music connects to the special effects. If people listen to it all, they hurt their hearing? Perhaps regional but I’ve never heard it called the “cinema” most call it the “movies” or “theater”
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Awesome job! Keep going!
Oct. 25, 2022
Thank you ever so much!
SinceriHonestly, I prefer to watch the films at home.
In sSpain, the sound in thevolume in cinemas is loud.
Names (Nina, Paolo), town names (Rome, Napoli), countries, etc. are written with a capital letter.
If people listen to music, and the special effects in aare very strong sound level/loud, they can get problems in their audition.
What do you mean with 'audition'?
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Well written. Keep it up!
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Problem With the Sound Problem Don’t have to capitalize prepositions in title. |
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Sincerily, I prefer to watch the films at home.
No need for “sincerely.” Unless the reader had a reason to think you liked theater movies more.
“Sincerely" is a bit too formal. If you're talking about films in general, no need for "the" if you're not talking about a some specific films. |
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In spain, the sound in the cinema is loud. In Names (Nina, Paolo), town names (Rome, Napoli), countries, etc. are written with a capital letter. In In Country names are capitalized. I can only speak for American English, but we would say "the movies" and not "the cinema"- though going to the cinema might be more of a British English thing? |
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If people listen music, and the special effects in a very strong sound level, they can get problems in their audition. If people listen to music What do you mean with 'audition'? If people listen to loud music Not sure how the music connects to the special effects. If people listen to it all, they hurt their hearing? Perhaps regional but I’ve never heard it called the “cinema” most call it the “movies” or “theater” If people are listening to music "Audition" is not used to describe hearing. This word is used to describe things like doing a musical performance to get into an orchestra. |
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Now I don't go to the cinema, it's a pity because always I liked to see the movies in the big screen.
Now I don't go to the Now I don't go to the cinema Prepositions are tricky- I'd look up the difference between "in" and "on" |
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