In my opinion, men tendprefer to hang out with multiple people, so a trip for two is rare. In my opinion, men prefer to hang out with multiple people, so a trip for two is rare.

"tend" describes behavior. "Prefer" describes, well, preference.

In Hokkaido, there are a lot of local dishes like seafood, Jjingisukan, Mmiso Rramen, Ssoup Ccurry, ice cream, and things like that. In Hokkaido, there are a lot of local dishes like seafood, jingisukan, miso ramen, soup curry, ice cream, and things like that.

TEven though we don't like shellfish, we enjoyed these dishes so much. Even though we don't like shellfish, we enjoyed these dishes so much.

Hakodate, one of the world's 3 "night views". Hakodate, one of the world's 3 "night views".

If you are introducing a concept you have yet to explain to the reader it is best to use quotation marks the first time.

IThat means that these night views are the most beautiful in the world. That means that these night views are the most beautiful in the world.

I don't know who judgeddetermined that, though. I don't know who determined that, though.

I don't know who judgeddecided that, though. I don't know who decided that, though.

"judged" might mean a specific contest.

The sceanery was magnificent. The scenery was magnificent.

The sceanery was magnificent. The scenery was magnificent.

Hokkaido is so vast that we couldn't get around the wholeall of it, so I wanna go there again. Hokkaido is so vast that we couldn't get around all of it, so I wanna go there again.

Hokkaido is so vast that we couldn't get around the whole of it, so I wanna go there again. Hokkaido is so vast that we couldn't get around the whole of it, so I wanna go there again.

In fact, I quarreled with him on the night of the last day due toover girls. In fact, I quarreled with him on the night of the last day over girls.

We had wanted to drink with girls, so we hit on some. We had wanted to drink with girls, so we hit on some.

I think this is what you mean

We had wanted to drink with girls, so we hit onflirted with them. We had wanted to drink with girls, so we flirted with them.

"Hit on" has a sort of negative meaning, like you're bothering them.

However, we hadve different types for girlspreferences in girls/women, and we messed up. However, we have different preferences in girls/women, and we messed up.

"Women" is probably better

I think we should make rules in advance forom next time. I think we should make rules in advance for next time.

Of course, we have already made up, and he is still my best friends. Of course, we have already made up, and he is still my best friend.