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President Jair Bolsonaro is denounced again at the Internati

That weekend the President of Brazil was again denounced at the International Criminal Court in The Hague in the Netherlands, on charges of genocide.
A few months ago, he was denounced for the first time for negligence in relation to indigenous peoples before the Coronavirus pandemic.

This time associations of doctors and health professionals presented a criminal representation on Sunday (26) to the International Criminal Court (ICC) denouncing the performance of the President of the Republic, Jair Bolsonaro, in the face of the pandemic of the new coronavirus.

In the document, the professionals claim that the president committed crimes against humanity through "serious and deadly failures in the conduct of the Covid-19 pandemic".

The number of new infections and deaths increases every day, many die for lack of medicines that the government does not give to hospitals and just wants patients to be treated with Chloroquine, a medicine without scientific confirmation that has been rejected in several countries.

He recently said that he was infected with Coronavirus and that in less than a week he had been treated with chloroquine and was cured, including advertising the medicine.
It is all a scam to sell the medicine and he gets a profit from the pharmaceutical companies!

The perverse Bolsonaro loyal Trump footman wants to promote the use of Chloroquine at all costs, now he has a health minister who is not a doctor, he is a military man, and Bolsonaro only appoints religious fanatics, extreme right conspiracy theorists and military for the ministers.
It is totally absurd and paranoid!

Someone needs to stop this scoundrel before it's too late!


Presidente Jair Bolsonaro é denunciado novamente no Tribunal Penal Internacional.

Nesse fim de semana o presidente do Brasil foi denunciado novamente no Tribunal Penal Internacional de Haia na Holanda, por acusação de genocídio.
Há alguns meses atrás ele foi denunciado pela primeira vez por descaso em relação aos povos indigenas perante a pandemai de Coronavirus.

Desta vez associações de medicos e profissionais da area da saude apresentaram uma representação criminal neste domingo (26) ao Tribunal Penal Internacional (TPI) denunciando a atuação do presidente da República, Jair Bolsonaro, diante da pandemia do novo coronavírus.

No documento, os profissionais afirmam que o presidente cometeu crimes contra a humanidade por meio de "falhas graves e mortais na condução da pandemia de Covid-19".

O numero de novas infecções e mortos aumenta a cada dia, muitos morrem por falta de remedios que o governo não dá para os hospitais e só quer que os doentes sejam tratados com Cloroquina, um remédio sem confirmaçao cientifica e que foi rejeitado em diversos paises.

Recentemente ele disse que estava infectado com Coronavirus e que em menos de uma semana fez tratamento com Cloroquina e se curou, fazendo propaganda do remédio inclusive.
É tudo uma farsa para vender o remédio e ele receber lucro por parte das empresas farmaceuticas!
O perverso Bolsonaro fiel lacaio de Trump quer a todo custo promover o uso da Cloroquina, agora ele tem um ministro da saude que não é médico, é um militar, e Bolsonaro só nomeia fanaticos religiosos , teoristas de conspirações de extrema direita e militares para os cargos de ministros.
É uma coisa totalmente absurda e paranóica!

Alguém precisa deter esse canalha antes que seja tarde de mais!

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President Jair Bolsonaro is denounced again at the International Criminal Court¶

Thatis weekend, the President of Brazil was again denounced again at the International Criminal Court in The Hague in the Netherlands, on charges of genocide.

This time, associations ofor doctors and health professionals presented a criminal representation on Sunday (26), 26 July, 2020 to the International Criminal Court (ICC) denouncing the performance of the President of the Republic of Brazil, Jair Bolsonaro, in the face of the pandemic of the newnovel coronavirus pandemic.

Putting the day of the month in parentheses is common in Brazilian media, but has no correlate in English-speaking media. Additionally, I put the date in an international format (26 July) but know that in American format it would be (July 26).

The phrasing used in English for the coronavirus seems to be "novel coronavirus".

In the document, healthe professionals claim that the president committed crimes against humanity through "by "leading serious and deadly failures in the conduct ofregarding the Covid-19 pandemic".

So while this isn't a word for word translation, this flows better, and reflects how an English speaker would word this phrasing. It feels chunky otherwise. Also "conduct" in English tends to be used differently than it does in Portuguese, and the use of the word "leading" better better reflects that.

The number of new infections and deaths is increasesing every day, m. Many die for lack of medicines thatare dying because the government does not want to give to hospitals and justthe right medicines, and instead, wants patients to be treated with Cchloroquine, a medicine without scientific confirmation that has been rejectfused in several countries.

Again, a lot of flow changes here. I tried to make this flow better in English. This works better in an active rather than passive voice ("because the government does not want to give medicines" vs "medicines that the government does not want to give") as it makes it clearer.

HeBolsonaro recently said that he was infected with Ccoronavirus and that in less than a week he had been treated with chloroquine and was cured, including in less than a week, basically advertising for the medicine.

Make it clear who we are talking about by changing "he" to "Bolsonaro".
I also wanted to make it clear that what he was doing was advertising. "Including" here would imply that he conducted further actions to advertise the chloroquine, when I think you mean that his actions were already advertisement.

It is all a scam to sell the medicine and he gets a profiis taking a cut from the pharmaceutical companies!

This is a more common way of saying this.

The perverse Bolsonaro loyal Trump footmanTrump-loyal footman Bolsonaro wants to promote the use of Cchloroquine at all costs, n. Now he has a health minister who is not a doctor, he is but a military man, and. Bolsonaro only appoints religious fanatics, extreme right conspiracy theorists, and military for the ministers.

"The perverse Trump-loyal footman" is an adjectival phrase modifying Bolsonaro, so Bolsonaro goes last.
By using "but" in "not a doctor but a military man" you achieve the same idea but in a much more natural way.
I have put a final comma after "theorists". This is called the Oxford comma if you want to read more about it. When you have a list of three things (X, Y, and Z) the comma after Y maintains this list, so the idea is "X and also Y and also Z" and not "X, and also (Y and Z)". It's a nuance, but one that I think is valuable to know.

ItHe is totally absurd and paranoid!

Things can't really be paranoid. Do you mean it's a paranoid situation? Or that Bolsonaro is paranoid?

Someone needs to stop this scoundrel before it's too late!

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Very well done! I would advise in general when doing translation to avoid trying for word for word translations, and instead try to come to the same idea through the target language. It comes with practice, so keep it up! Well done!

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danielsiq

July 27, 2020

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Thank you for the corrections and tips!

Best regards from Brazil

President Jair Bolsonaro is denounced again at the International Criminal Court

ThaLast weekend, the Ppresident of Brazil was again denounced again at the International Criminal Court in The Hague in the Netherlands, on charges of genocide.

A few months ago, he was denounced for the first time for negligence in relation to indigenous peoples before the Ccoronavirus pandemic.

This time, associations of doctors and health professionals presented a criminal representation on Sunday (26) to the International Criminal Court (ICC) denouncing the performance of the President of the Republic, Jair Bolsonaro, in the face of the pandemic of the new coronavirus pandemic.

In the document, the professionals claim that the president committed crimes against humanity through "serious and deadly failures in the conduct ofduring the Covid-19 pandemic".

I don’t know if that quote is an exact quote or a translated quote, but it sounds a bit off to me, so I changed it around a bit.

The number of new infections and deaths increases every day, many dieying for lack of medicines that the government does not give to hospitals and just wantshas chosen to withhold from hospitals. They suggest that patients to be treated with Chloroquine, a medicine without scientific confirmation that has been rejected in several countries.

HeThe president recently said that he was infected with Ccoronavirus and that win less thain a week, he had been treated with chloroquine and was cured, includingthus advertising the medicine.

It is all a scam to sell the medicine and he gets a cut of the profits from the pharmaceutical companies!

The perverse Bolsonaro, who is a loyal Trump footman, wants to promote the use of Chloroquine at all costs, n. Now he has a health minister who is not a doctor, he is a military man, and Bolsonaro; and he only appoints religious fanatics, extreme right conspiracy theorists, and military for the ministerembers of the military to ministry positions.

It is totally absurd and paranoid!

Someone needs to stop this scoundrel before it's too late!

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danielsiq

July 27, 2020

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Thank you!

President Jair Bolsonaro is denounced again at the Internati


President Jair Bolsonaro is denounced again at the International Criminal Court

President Jair Bolsonaro is denounced again at the International Criminal Court¶

That weekend the President of Brazil was again denounced at the International Criminal Court in The Hague in the Netherlands, on charges of genocide.


ThaLast weekend, the Ppresident of Brazil was again denounced again at the International Criminal Court in The Hague in the Netherlands, on charges of genocide.

Thatis weekend, the President of Brazil was again denounced again at the International Criminal Court in The Hague in the Netherlands, on charges of genocide.

A few months ago, he was denounced for the first time for negligence in relation to indigenous peoples before the Coronavirus pandemai.


This time associations of doctors and health professionals presented a criminal representation on Sunday (26) to the International Criminal Court (ICC) denouncing the performance of the President of the Republic, Jair Bolsonaro, in the face of the pandemic of the new coronavirus.


This time, associations of doctors and health professionals presented a criminal representation on Sunday (26) to the International Criminal Court (ICC) denouncing the performance of the President of the Republic, Jair Bolsonaro, in the face of the pandemic of the new coronavirus pandemic.

This time, associations ofor doctors and health professionals presented a criminal representation on Sunday (26), 26 July, 2020 to the International Criminal Court (ICC) denouncing the performance of the President of the Republic of Brazil, Jair Bolsonaro, in the face of the pandemic of the newnovel coronavirus pandemic.

Putting the day of the month in parentheses is common in Brazilian media, but has no correlate in English-speaking media. Additionally, I put the date in an international format (26 July) but know that in American format it would be (July 26). The phrasing used in English for the coronavirus seems to be "novel coronavirus".

In the document, the professionals claim that the president committed crimes against humanity through "serious and deadly failures in the conduct of the Covid-19 pandemic".


In the document, the professionals claim that the president committed crimes against humanity through "serious and deadly failures in the conduct ofduring the Covid-19 pandemic".

I don’t know if that quote is an exact quote or a translated quote, but it sounds a bit off to me, so I changed it around a bit.

In the document, healthe professionals claim that the president committed crimes against humanity through "by "leading serious and deadly failures in the conduct ofregarding the Covid-19 pandemic".

So while this isn't a word for word translation, this flows better, and reflects how an English speaker would word this phrasing. It feels chunky otherwise. Also "conduct" in English tends to be used differently than it does in Portuguese, and the use of the word "leading" better better reflects that.

The number of new infections and deaths increases every day, many die for lack of medicines that the government does not give to hospitals and just wants patients to be treated with Chloroquine, a medicine without scientific confirmation that has been rejected in several countries.


The number of new infections and deaths increases every day, many dieying for lack of medicines that the government does not give to hospitals and just wantshas chosen to withhold from hospitals. They suggest that patients to be treated with Chloroquine, a medicine without scientific confirmation that has been rejected in several countries.

The number of new infections and deaths is increasesing every day, m. Many die for lack of medicines thatare dying because the government does not want to give to hospitals and justthe right medicines, and instead, wants patients to be treated with Cchloroquine, a medicine without scientific confirmation that has been rejectfused in several countries.

Again, a lot of flow changes here. I tried to make this flow better in English. This works better in an active rather than passive voice ("because the government does not want to give medicines" vs "medicines that the government does not want to give") as it makes it clearer.

He recently said that he was infected with Coronavirus and that in less than a week he had been treated with chloroquine and was cured, including advertising the medicine.


HeThe president recently said that he was infected with Ccoronavirus and that win less thain a week, he had been treated with chloroquine and was cured, includingthus advertising the medicine.

HeBolsonaro recently said that he was infected with Ccoronavirus and that in less than a week he had been treated with chloroquine and was cured, including in less than a week, basically advertising for the medicine.

Make it clear who we are talking about by changing "he" to "Bolsonaro". I also wanted to make it clear that what he was doing was advertising. "Including" here would imply that he conducted further actions to advertise the chloroquine, when I think you mean that his actions were already advertisement.

It is all a scam to sell the medicine and he gets a profit from the pharmaceutical companies!


It is all a scam to sell the medicine and he gets a cut of the profits from the pharmaceutical companies!

It is all a scam to sell the medicine and he gets a profiis taking a cut from the pharmaceutical companies!

This is a more common way of saying this.

The perverse Bolsonaro loyal Trump footman wants to promote the use of Chloroquine at all costs, now he has a health minister who is not a doctor, he is a military man, and Bolsonaro only appoints religious fanatics, extreme right conspiracy theorists and military for the ministers.


The perverse Bolsonaro, who is a loyal Trump footman, wants to promote the use of Chloroquine at all costs, n. Now he has a health minister who is not a doctor, he is a military man, and Bolsonaro; and he only appoints religious fanatics, extreme right conspiracy theorists, and military for the ministerembers of the military to ministry positions.

The perverse Bolsonaro loyal Trump footmanTrump-loyal footman Bolsonaro wants to promote the use of Cchloroquine at all costs, n. Now he has a health minister who is not a doctor, he is but a military man, and. Bolsonaro only appoints religious fanatics, extreme right conspiracy theorists, and military for the ministers.

"The perverse Trump-loyal footman" is an adjectival phrase modifying Bolsonaro, so Bolsonaro goes last. By using "but" in "not a doctor but a military man" you achieve the same idea but in a much more natural way. I have put a final comma after "theorists". This is called the Oxford comma if you want to read more about it. When you have a list of three things (X, Y, and Z) the comma after Y maintains this list, so the idea is "X and also Y and also Z" and not "X, and also (Y and Z)". It's a nuance, but one that I think is valuable to know.

It is totally absurd and paranoid!


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ItHe is totally absurd and paranoid!

Things can't really be paranoid. Do you mean it's a paranoid situation? Or that Bolsonaro is paranoid?

Someone needs to stop this scoundrel before it's too late!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A few months ago, he was denounced for the first time for negligence in relation to indigenous peoples before the Coronavirus pandemic.


A few months ago, he was denounced for the first time for negligence in relation to indigenous peoples before the Ccoronavirus pandemic.

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