Sept. 26, 2021
Preference
During reading about the history of fountain pens, I saw an interesting thing.
The book quotes,
“The fountain pens sell more these days, it is because fountain pens become own’s decoration rather than essentials.
With the pen, we can know his preference which describes his character.”
I am a fountain pen user, so I totally agree these words.
What’s more, Not only a pen, but also a color of pen ink is also an important point to know one’s character, I think.
Most people use black color as detail when writing.
Some of pen users use blue-black color, others use dark-gray, which is similar as pencil’s color.
Like this, I can find many interesting things from the pen.
I also recommend to consider your writing tools to show your own character.
DuringWhile reading about the history of fountain pens, I saw an interesting thing.
The book quostates,
“The fountain pens sell more these days, it is because fountain pens become own’s decoration rather than essentials.
I think I understand what this quote is trying to say, but it needs rephrasing to make the idea clear. One idea:
"Despite no longer being essential, fountain pen sales continue to rise. Today, a fountain pen reflects the personality and character of the person who uses it."
I am a fountain pen user, so I totally agree these words.
What’s more, Not only a pen, but also aIn addition, the color of the pen ink is also an important point to know reflection of one’'s character, I think.
Most people use black color as detail when writing.
I wasn't sure what "as detail" meant here.
Some of pen users use blue-black color, and others use dark-gray, which is similar to as pencil’s color.
Like this, I can find many interesting things from the pen.
I wasn't sure what this means.
I also recommend to considerusing your writing tools to show your own character.
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Interesting read! Thanks :)
Sept. 27, 2021
Thank you, I will try to write as your advices.
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Preference |
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During reading about history of fountain pens, I saw an interesting thing. |
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The book quotes, The book |
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“The fountain pens sell more these days, it is because fountain pens become own’s decoration rather than essentials. “The fountain pens sell more these days, it is because fountain pens become own’s decoration rather than essentials. I think I understand what this quote is trying to say, but it needs rephrasing to make the idea clear. One idea: "Despite no longer being essential, fountain pen sales continue to rise. Today, a fountain pen reflects the personality and character of the person who uses it." |
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With the pen, we can know his preference which describes his character.” |
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I am a fountain pen user, so I totally agree this words. |
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What’s more, Not only pen, but also color of pen ink is also important point to know one’s character, I think. |
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Most people use black color as detail when writing. Most people use black color as detail when writing. I wasn't sure what "as detail" meant here. |
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Some of pen users use blue-black color, others use dark-gray which is similar as pencil’s color. |
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Like this, I can find many interesting things from pen. |
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I also recommend to consider your writing tools to show your own character. I also recommend |
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During reading about the history of fountain pens, I saw an interesting thing.
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I am a fountain pen user, so I totally agree these words. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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What’s more, Not only a pen, but also a color of pen ink is also an important point to know one’s character, I think.
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Some of pen users use blue-black color, others use dark-gray, which is similar as pencil’s color. Some |
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Like this, I can find many interesting things from the pen. Like this, I can find many interesting things from the pen. I wasn't sure what this means. |
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