Nov. 22, 2019
Preference
( Some people prefer to work on school projects with a group, while others would rather work alone. )
There are over hundreds of ways to complete projects, some like to do it with co-workers, others prefer doing by themself. Both have upsides and downsides, working with other people will gain vary viewpoints from them, and learn how to respect from different opinions; however, doing work alone that is able to state their own points completely.
To begin with, there are a lot of views for a thing because everyone is from different places, growing in different families, and different education. To hear differing aspects is one of the life lessons which will probably give you other ideas that you have not ever thought of; learn more knowledge which you have not expected to. In addition, one of the more important things of working on school projects is a discussion. Students can learn how to communicate with others who have opposite sights and respect them, which definitely affect on their social network. If someone who did not listen to other viewpoints and only insist own point, he/she might do not have many friends. Moreover, having a good communication skill and accepting others advises which will help you to earn more life-enriching experience, and let you become a better person.
On the other hand, work school projects on your own are a good way to state own's points completely. Students are able to illustrate the self idea and give a whole comprehensive picture to someone who examines their works. Furthermore, doing homework alone is more efficient. The reseasons of this are that you can schedule your time, make a plan and complete it as soon as possible, and does not have to match-up co-workers' schedule that will cut much more time.
To put it briefly, some students prefer doing assignments with a group over than working alone. This is because listen to different points which gives much more benefits, such as communication and respecting skill, but disadvantages are not able to demonstrate own ideas completely and not efficiency. Personally, I, for one, prefer working on school projects with other students.
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Nov. 22, 2019
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( Some people prefer to work on school projects with a group, while others would rather work alone.
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What was the reason for the parentheses here? |
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There are over hundreds of ways to complete projects, some like to do it with co-workers, others prefer doing by themself. There are over a hundred |
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Both have upsides and downsides, working with other people will gain vary viewpoints from them, and learn how to respect from different opinions; however, doing work alone that is able to state their own points completely. Both approaches have upsides and downsides, working with other people Changed the text to make it sound a bit more natural. |
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To begin with, there are a lot of views for a thing because everyone is from different places, growing in different families, and different education. To begin with, there are |
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To hear differing aspects is one of the life lessons which will probably give you other ideas that you have not ever thought of; learn more knowledge which you have not expected to.
What do you mean my aspects? |
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In addition, one of the more important things of working on school projects is a discussion. In addition, one of the more important things of working on school projects is |
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Students can learn how to communicate with others who have opposite sights and respect them, which definitely affect on their social network.
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If someone who did not listen to other viewpoints and only insist own point, he/she might do not have many friends.
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Moreover, having a good communication skill and accepting others advises which will help you to earn more life-enriching experience, and let you become a better person.
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On the other hand, work school projects on your own are a good way to state own's points completely. On the other hand, doing work |
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Students are able to illustrate the self idea and give a whole comprehensive picture to someone who examines their works.
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Furthermore, doing homework alone is more efficient. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The reseasons of this are that you can schedule your time, make a plan and complete it as soon as possible, and does not have to match-up co-workers' schedule that will cut much more time.
You could maybe add "...,thus reducing the time to complete the project." at the end of the sentence, too. |
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To put it briefly, some students prefer doing assignments with a group over than working alone. To put it briefly, some students prefer doing assignments with a group |
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This is because listen to different points which gives much more benefits, such as communication and respecting skill, but disadvantages are not able to demonstrate own ideas completely and not efficiency.
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Personally, I, for one, prefer working on school projects with other students.
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