FA few days ago, I watched a video content about self-recognition.

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FA few days ago, I watched a video content about self-recognition.

WhenMany young age, many people are trying to do everything not only to improvinge their skills but also makingto make many friends.

As they growing older, they need to (do/)choose things which they can do best.

You could use "do" instead

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beautiful sentence :)

Few days ago, I watched a video content about self-recognition.

When young age, mMany people are tryingtry to do everything not onlyat a young age, like improving their skills but alsoand making manylots of friends.

I changed the order of phrases in this sentence to make it sound more natural.

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Try not to start a sentence with "because."

I agree with this idea that, because now I don’t have time to do all other things except working and taking care of my kids, now.

For self-improvement, I have to wake up earlier than 6 AM before my family wakes upthe rest of my family - so before 6am.

At the very first time, this liffirst, this lifestyle change was too hard to do, because I was a night owl.

However, theis time is now my most precious onetime of the day, and I can do what I really want to do.

The time is like an oasis in athe desert during my daytime.

This is a lovely analogy!

Few days ago, I watched a video content about self-recognition.

A few days ago, I watched a video about self-recognition.

When young age, many people are trying to do everything not only improving their skills but also making many friends.

At a young age, many people are trying to do everything - not only improving their skills, but also making many friends.

As growing older, they need to choose things which they can do best.

As they grow older, they need to choose the things that they can do best, because they don't have enough time or energy to do everything like the young.

I agree this idea that I don’t have time to do all other things except working and taking care of my kids, now.

I agree with this idea because I don't have time for many things other than working and taking care of my kids now.

At the very first time, this life was too hard to do, because I was a night owl.

On the first time, this way of living was hard to do because I was a night owl.

However, the time is now my precious one, and I do what I really want to do.

However, that time is now precious to me, and I do what I really want to do.

Time is Precious Time

FA few days ago, I watched a video content about self-recognition.

WhenMany young age, many people are tryingpeople try to do everything, not only seeking to improvinge their skills but also makingtrying to make many friends.

AsHowever, as they growing older, they may need to choose things which they can do bestbe more selective about what they choose to spend their time on.

I've suggested a way you can rephrase to make it sound a bit more natural.

Because, there is not enough time and not enough energy to do everything like the youngThis is because, as they grow older, they will find that one's time and energy are limited.

I agree with this idea. Nowadays, I find that I don’t have time to do all other things exceptmany things other than working and taking care of my kids, now.

If you're narrating something, it sounds a bit less abrupt to say "nowadays" or "these days" if you're talking about a habit.

ForIn order to spend time on self-improvement, I have to wake up earlier than 6 AM, before my family wakes up.

At the very first timefirst, this life was too hard to do, because I wasam a night owl.

However, theI feel that time is now my precious one, and I should do what I really want to do.

The time is like an oasis in a desert during my daytime.