Sept. 19, 2023
More and more people are arguing about pre-made food or pre-made dishes. It has been suggested that making all school canteens sell pre-made food could be a state strategy.
So what exactly is pre-made food? Dishes sold in restaurants are typically cooked by professional cookers. The chefs boil, fry fresh meat, vegetable mixed with some ingredients based on a specific recipe in the restaurant kitchen. This has been gradually changed in the past years, especially in some chain restaurants. The new style of restaurant company opened many branches in different regions, but only set up a central kitchen to produce and dispatch dishes to branches, and they may only buy pre-made dishes from food factories.
In reality, a growing number of dishes that we purchase online are pre-made dishes; they looked good, inexpensive, but with low nutrients. It's no doubt that there are many antiseptic and excessive amounts of salt in it.
Personally, I consider that this kind of dish can be a complementary option to sold in restaurants, however, I personally strongly oppose them to be sold in school canteens. Students require sufficient healthy food to support frowth.
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Great job! Cafeteria is a more common word used for canteen. In the states, the location where children eat at a school is known as the cafeteria.
Pre-made Food
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It has been suggested that making all school canteens sell pre-made food could be a state strategy.
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Great write-up! I think it explored the topic pretty well and was able to provide enough context for readers to understand the debate topic without having prior knowledge on the subject. You were able to convey your thoughts and opinions quite well, and most of my edits were just for stylistic choices and specific usage quirks.
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It's no doubt that there are many antiseptic and excessive amounts of salt in it.
"Antiseptic" is often used in laboratory settings.
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Personally, I consider that this kind of dish can be a complementary option to sold in restaurants, however, I personally strongly oppose them to be sold in school canteens.
"Personally" is overused and becomes redundant with verbs that express opinion. The sentence was split into two for readability. Personally, I |
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