July 31, 2023
Practicum
When I was seventeen years old, I studied in a technical secondary school. It was also the second year I studied in the school. My major was agricultural mechanization.
According to the education plan, there was a practice lesson starting on October first of the year. The name of the practice lesson was mechanized tillage practice, which was conducted on a state owned farm in another county of Bengbu city.
The name of the farm was Longkang, which was about 150 kilometers away from the city that my school was in.
My classmates and I took a bus there. The farm covered a large area so that I couldn't see a village when I was at the farm. All I could see was the endless farmland.
The farm had many tractors. The brand of the tractor was Dongfanghong, which was made in Luoyang city, China. It was a crawler tractor with a power of 75 horsepower.
A tractor carried a five-furrow plough. I drove it to plough the farmland. My classmates and I did different shifts. I drove the tractor to plough the farmland during daytime or night according to the shift plan.
When I ploughed the farmland at night, I had a meal in the middle of the night. The meal was mutton soup.
We students did the practice lesson on that farm for a month. At the end of October, we went back to our school to continue our theory lesson.
Practicum
When I was seventeen years old, I studied inat a technical secondary school.
It was also the second year I studied in theis school.
My major was agricultural mechanization.
According to the education plan,schedule / timetable there was a practice lesson starting on Octoberthe first of October in the year.
The name of the practice lesson was mechanized tillage practice, which was conducted on a state owned farm in another county of Bengbu city.
The name of the farm was Longkang, which was about 150 kilometers away from the city that my school was in.
My classmates and I took a bus there.
The farm covered a large area so that I couldn't see athe village when I was at the farm.
All I could see was the endless farmland.
The farm had many tractors.
The brand of the tractor was Dongfanghong, which was made in Luoyang city, China.
It was a crawler tractor with a power of 75 horsepower.
AThe tractor carried a five-furrow plough.
I drove it to plough the farmland.
My classmates and I did different shifts.
I drove the tractor to plough the farmland during daytime or night according to the shift plan.roster.
When I ploughed the farmland at night, I had a meal in the middle of the night.
The meal was mutton soup.
We students did the practice lesson on that farm for a month.
At the end of October, we went back to our school to continue our theoryetical lesson.s.
July 31, 2023
Thank you very much.
Practicum
When I was seventeen years old, I studied in a technical secondary school.
It was also the second year I studied in the school.
My major was agricultural mechanization.
According to the education plan, there was a practice lesson starting on October first of thethat year.
"On the first of October that year" also works.
The name of the practice lesson was mechanized tillage practice, which was conducted on a state owned farm in another county of Bengbu city.
The name of the farm was Longkang, which was about 150 kilometers away from the city that my school was in.
My classmates and I took a bus there.
The farm covered a large area so that I couldn't see a village when I was at the farm.
All I could see was the endless farmland.
The farm had many tractors.
The brand of the tractor was Dongfanghong, which was made in Luoyang city, China.
In the "City, Country" format, city only goes there if it's a part of the official name, like New York City.
It was a crawler tractor with a power of 75 horsepower.
Yours is fine, but specifying you're talking about the power of the tractor is unnecessary, since it's implied.
A tractor carried a five-furrow plough.
I drove it to plough the farmland.
My classmates and I did different shifts.
I drove the tractor to plough the farmland during daytimethe day or night according to the shift plan.
You might have been right here originally. It just felt slightly off to me. I wish I could explain why.
When I ploughed the farmland at night, I had a meal in the middle of the night.
The meal was mutton soup.
We students did the practice lesson on that farm for a month.
At the end of October, we went back to our school to continue our theory lesson.
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July 31, 2023
Thank you very much.
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