Practicing the writing with a useful technicque: The 5 "w"W"s

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Practicing the writing with a useful technicque: The 5 "w"

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You can only "watch" something that's moving, like a video or a person, not a picture.

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I'm not sure what you mean by "had the free hair." My correction means that her hair falls down over one side of her body.

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I changed "is" to "was" in the last sentence because even if she still is writing, if "I thought" is in past tense the rest of the sentence usually needs to be in past tense too.

What wereas she doing?

"were" is plural, but she's only one person.

I don't know, i'm not sure, but i suppose she wereas writing.

Having both "I don't know" and "I'm not sure" works, but most of the time you would only use one of those.

That's what ist lookings like.

I can't really tell what you mean here. This correction means that it looks like the last sentence is true.

Where wereas she?

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Exist theIt's possibilityle she was in a coworking space.

This phrase "There exists the possibility" exists, but it's very rare.

Why arewill she doing that?

I assume you want future tense here

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I didn't correct this, but California isn't a city. Some big cities in California are San Francisco and Los Angeles.

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Every sentence in English needs a subject. If it doesn't seem like there would be a subject, use "it."

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Practicing the writing with a useful technicque: The 5 "w"W"s

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Where wereas she?

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working in her home. → working from home.

works as well

Exist the possibilityIt is possible that she was in a co-working space.

Why areis she doing that?

(futurepresent)

(future) only when you talk about the trip to California

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