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SummerTeaWater

Oct. 29, 2021

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Practicing Role Play

As I came into my room, I noticed that it messed up with toys.

By my count, it has happened three times today alone.

I know that it was caused by children who always played with the toys.

I said that whoever using them last should be responsible for cleaning up.

It is not something I can’t force my child to do, but I hope they can clean by themselves.

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Practicing Role Play

As I came into my room, I noticed that it messed upwas messy with toys.

By my count, it has happened three times today alone.

I know that it was caused by the children who always played with the toys.

I said that whoever usinged them last ishould be responsible for cleaning up.

It is not something I can’t force my child to do, but I hope they canwill clean up by themselves.

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Nice work! :D

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SummerTeaWater

Oct. 30, 2021

402

Thank you very much.

Practicing Role Play


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As I came into my room, I noticed that it messed up with toys.


As I came into my room, I noticed that it messed upwas messy with toys.

By my count, it has happened three times today alone.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I know that it was caused by children who always played with the toys.


I know that it was caused by the children who always played with the toys.

I said that whoever using them last should be responsible for cleaning up.


I said that whoever usinged them last ishould be responsible for cleaning up.

It is not something I can’t force my child to do, but I hope they can clean by themselves.


It is not something I can’t force my child to do, but I hope they canwill clean up by themselves.

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