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SummerTeaWater

Feb. 16, 2022

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Practicing My Instrument

It isn't possible to do now, but I used to play a classical instrument in my free time.

Every lunch time, I practiced an oboe that is a kind of woodwind instrument.

During playing music even though I couldn't play well, I could reduce my stress.

Because of COVID-19, the practice room is now blocked, as a result, I haven't practiced it for 2 years.

I don't want to forget how to play, so I hope the pandemic situation comes to an end soon.

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Practicing My Instrument

It isn't possible to do now, but I used to play a classical instrument in my free time.

Everyday at lunch time, I practiced an oboe that, which is a kind of woodwind instrument.

During playing music eEven though I couldn't play well, I could reduce my stress whenever I played music.

Because of COVID-19, the practice room is now blocked, and as a result, I haven't practiced it for 2 years.

I don't want to forget how to play, so I hope the pandemic situation comes to an end soon.

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Great job! :D

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SummerTeaWater

Feb. 17, 2022

402

Thank you very much! :)

Practicing My Instrument

It isn't possible to do now, but I used to play a classical instrument in my free time, though I'm not able to do so right now.

"I'm not able to" sounds more natural than "It isn't possible to do" in this sentence.

Every day at lunch time, I practiced anthe oboe that is (a kind of woodwind instrument).

DuringI could reduce my stress while playing music, even though I couldn't play well, I could reduce my stress.

Reorganized this sentence to sound more natural.

Because of COVID-19, the practice room is now blocked, and as a result, I haven't practiced it for 2 years.

I don't want to forget how to play, so I hope the pandemic situation comes to an end soon.

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잘 쓰셨습니다! 우아, 오보에가 어떻게 연주하는지 알아요? 그건 대박이네!

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SummerTeaWater

Feb. 16, 2022

402

고맙습니다! 소리가 너무 좋아서 배우게 되었네요. :)

It isn't possible to do now, but I used to play a classical instrument in my free time.

I don't (practice) anymore, but I used to play a classical instrument in my free time.

Every lunch time, I practiced anthe oboe that, which is a kindtype of woodwind instrument.

DuringWhile/Through/By playing music, even though I couldn't play well, I could reduce my stress.

Because of COVID-19, the practice room is now blockshut/closed, as a result, I haven't practiced it for 2 years.

I don't want to forget how to play, so I hope the pandemic situation comes to an end soon.

Or simpler, 'so I hope the pandemic ends soon.'

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Well done :)

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SummerTeaWater

Feb. 16, 2022

402

Thank you.

Practicing My Instrument


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It isn't possible to do now, but I used to play a classical instrument in my free time.


It isn't possible to do now, but I used to play a classical instrument in my free time.

I don't (practice) anymore, but I used to play a classical instrument in my free time.

It isn't possible to do now, but I used to play a classical instrument in my free time, though I'm not able to do so right now.

"I'm not able to" sounds more natural than "It isn't possible to do" in this sentence.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Every lunch time, I practiced an oboe that is a kind of woodwind instrument.


Every lunch time, I practiced anthe oboe that, which is a kindtype of woodwind instrument.

Every day at lunch time, I practiced anthe oboe that is (a kind of woodwind instrument).

Everyday at lunch time, I practiced an oboe that, which is a kind of woodwind instrument.

During playing music even though I couldn't play well, I could reduce my stress.


DuringWhile/Through/By playing music, even though I couldn't play well, I could reduce my stress.

DuringI could reduce my stress while playing music, even though I couldn't play well, I could reduce my stress.

Reorganized this sentence to sound more natural.

During playing music eEven though I couldn't play well, I could reduce my stress whenever I played music.

Because of COVID-19, the practice room is now blocked, as a result, I haven't practiced it for 2 years.


Because of COVID-19, the practice room is now blockshut/closed, as a result, I haven't practiced it for 2 years.

Because of COVID-19, the practice room is now blocked, and as a result, I haven't practiced it for 2 years.

Because of COVID-19, the practice room is now blocked, and as a result, I haven't practiced it for 2 years.

I don't want to forget how to play, so I hope the pandemic situation comes to an end soon.


I don't want to forget how to play, so I hope the pandemic situation comes to an end soon.

Or simpler, 'so I hope the pandemic ends soon.'

I don't want to forget how to play, so I hope the pandemic situation comes to an end soon.

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