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SummerTeaWater

Jan. 26, 2022

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Practice Tense

1.

I used to drink coffee.

Sometimes I had a terrible headach after drinking it.

My friend said that I should try tea for my health

So I started drinking tea every day.

Since then, I've calm down my headache.

Nowadays, drinking tea is one of my favorite hobbies.


2.

A few years ago, I used to buy and read paper books.

When I had troubles by no space keeping the books, my brother recommended
that I should try to read e-books.

So I started reading them on the Kindle app.

Since then, I've been buying and reading lots on many other e-book apps.

Nowadays, reading e-book is more convenient than paper books.

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Practice Tense

1.

I used to drink coffee.

Sometimes I hadget a terrible headache after drinking it.

I corrected headache. I added get as had is past tense

My friend said that I should try tea for my health

So I started drinking tea every day.

Since then, I've calm down my headaches have calmed down.

This is good I wrote another way to say it

Nowadays, drinking tea is one of my favorite hobbies.

A few years ago, I used to buy and read paper books.

When I had troubles by no space keepingno more space for the books, my brother recommended

I made sound more natural

that I should try to read e-books.

So I started reading them on the Kindle app.

Since then, I've been buying and reading lots on many other e-book apps.

Nowadays, reading e-book is more convenient than paper books.

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Good job!! You’re really improving!!

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SummerTeaWater

Jan. 26, 2022

402

Thank you so much.

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Archiekinz

Jan. 26, 2022

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You’re welcome!!

I used to drink coffee.

Sometimes, I hadwould get a terrible headache after drinking it.

My friend saiuggested that I should try tea forto improve my health.

So I started drinking tea every day.

Since then, I've calm down my headachemy headaches have gone away.

Nowadays, drinking tea is one of my favorite hobbies.

A few years ago, I used to buy and read paper books.

When I had troubles by no finding space to keeping the my books, my brother recommended that I should try reading e-books.

Some minor edits for clarity.
I think your sentence got cut off here, so I added the fragment from the next section.

So I started reading them on the Kindle app.

Since then, I've been buying and reading lots on manythings on several other e-book apps.

Nowadays, reading e-book iss are more convenient than paper books.

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잘 했습니다! 저는 종이책이 전자책보다 더 좋아해요. 저에게 새로운 페이지의 냄새가 아름다워요. 그러나, 다 가지의 책이 좋은 책입니다.

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SummerTeaWater

Jan. 26, 2022

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종이책에서 나는 그 냄새는 정말 좋아요. 고쳐주셔서 고맙습니다.

Practicse Tense

Practise is the verb

1.

I used to drink coffee.

Sometimes I hadve a terrible headach after drinking it.

My friend said that I should try tea for my health

So I started drinking tea every day.

Since then, I've calm downdecreased my headaches.

Nowadays, drinking tea is one of my favorite hobbiethings.

2.

A few years ago, I used to buy and read paper books.

When I had troubles byfound I had no space keepingto store the books, my brother recommended

that I should try to read e-books.

So I started reading them on the Kindle app.

Since then, I've been buying and reading lots on many other e-book apps.

Nowadays, reading e-book is more convenient than reading paper books.

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Well done

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SummerTeaWater

Jan. 26, 2022

402

Thank you so much.

Sometimes I hadwould get a terrible headache after drinking it.

Your original sentence is fine, this is just a stylistic suggestion to use a more commen phrasing (in my opinion).

Since then, I've calmed down my headaches.

Because you "sometimes" "used to" get a headache it means you got it (them) multiple times. So you should say "my headaches" (plural) even though its okay to say "I used to get a headache when ______" (English plurals are so weird, I know ㅠㅠ). Just remember that the "sometimes" and "used to" part means it happened more than one time, so you need to say "my headaches" (plural) here :)

Also!! You can say "Since then, my headaches have calmed down." Your sentence is totally fine, but personally I would write it in this form instead, just because it sounds nice to me. You can keep your original sentence if you prefer it! ^^

When I had troubles bydue to having no space for keeping the books, my brother recommended

You can say "due to" or "because of" or even "caused by" here. They are all roughly the same in this situation.

You can also say: "When I had trouble (with) finding space to keep the books in, my brother..."

Nowadays, reading e-books is more convenient than paper books.

You can say:

1. reading e-books is more convienient...

or

2. reading an e-book is more convenient...

Just choose whichever one sounds nice to you, or flip a coin :P You just need to either write "e-books" in plural form, or say "an e-book" (singular) for it to sound natural. The meaning will be the same either way.

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Great work!

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SummerTeaWater

Jan. 26, 2022

402

Thank you very very much.

I used to drink coffee.

Sometimes I had a terrible headache after drinking it.

My friend said that I should try tea for my health, so I started drinking it every day.

Since then, I've calm down my headaches have calmed down.

Nowadays, drinking tea is one of my favorite hobbiesthings to do.

I wouldn't really consider drinking tea a 'hobby' though others might disagree.

A few years ago, I used to buy and read paper books.

When I had troubles by nowith running out of space to keeping the books, my brother recommended

(This was a tricky one, I think my correction works)

that I should try to read e-books.

So I started reading them on the Kindle app.

Since then, I've been buying and reading lots on many other e-book apps.

Nowadays, reading e-books is more convenient than paper books.

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I agree! I got rid of all my paper books when I moved out of home. Sometimes I miss my childhood collection, but I just don't want to lug so much heavy paper around with me whenever I move house!

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SummerTeaWater

Jan. 26, 2022

402

Thank you for your corrections.

Practice Tense


Practicse Tense

Practise is the verb

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I used to drink coffee.


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Sometimes I had a terrible headach after drinking it.


Sometimes I had a terrible headache after drinking it.

Sometimes I hadwould get a terrible headache after drinking it.

Your original sentence is fine, this is just a stylistic suggestion to use a more commen phrasing (in my opinion).

Sometimes I hadve a terrible headach after drinking it.

Sometimes, I hadwould get a terrible headache after drinking it.

Sometimes I hadget a terrible headache after drinking it.

I corrected headache. I added get as had is past tense

My friend said that I should try tea for my health


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My friend saiuggested that I should try tea forto improve my health.

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So I started drinking tea every day.


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Since then, I've calm down my headache.


Since then, I've calm down my headaches have calmed down.

Since then, I've calmed down my headaches.

Because you "sometimes" "used to" get a headache it means you got it (them) multiple times. So you should say "my headaches" (plural) even though its okay to say "I used to get a headache when ______" (English plurals are so weird, I know ㅠㅠ). Just remember that the "sometimes" and "used to" part means it happened more than one time, so you need to say "my headaches" (plural) here :) Also!! You can say "Since then, my headaches have calmed down." Your sentence is totally fine, but personally I would write it in this form instead, just because it sounds nice to me. You can keep your original sentence if you prefer it! ^^

Since then, I've calm downdecreased my headaches.

Since then, I've calm down my headachemy headaches have gone away.

Since then, I've calm down my headaches have calmed down.

This is good I wrote another way to say it

Nowadays, drinking tea is one of my favorite hobbies.


Nowadays, drinking tea is one of my favorite hobbiesthings to do.

I wouldn't really consider drinking tea a 'hobby' though others might disagree.

Nowadays, drinking tea is one of my favorite hobbiethings.

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A few years ago, I used to buy and read paper books.


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When I had troubles by no space keeping the books, my brother recommended


When I had troubles by nowith running out of space to keeping the books, my brother recommended

(This was a tricky one, I think my correction works)

When I had troubles bydue to having no space for keeping the books, my brother recommended

You can say "due to" or "because of" or even "caused by" here. They are all roughly the same in this situation. You can also say: "When I had trouble (with) finding space to keep the books in, my brother..."

When I had troubles byfound I had no space keepingto store the books, my brother recommended

When I had troubles by no finding space to keeping the my books, my brother recommended that I should try reading e-books.

Some minor edits for clarity. I think your sentence got cut off here, so I added the fragment from the next section.

When I had troubles by no space keepingno more space for the books, my brother recommended

I made sound more natural

that I should try to read e-books.


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So I started reading them on the Kindle app.


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So I started reading them on the Kindle app.

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Since then, I've been buying and reading lots on many other e-book apps.


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Since then, I've been buying and reading lots on manythings on several other e-book apps.

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Nowadays, reading e-book is more convenient than paper books.


Nowadays, reading e-books is more convenient than paper books.

Nowadays, reading e-books is more convenient than paper books.

You can say: 1. reading e-books is more convienient... or 2. reading an e-book is more convenient... Just choose whichever one sounds nice to you, or flip a coin :P You just need to either write "e-books" in plural form, or say "an e-book" (singular) for it to sound natural. The meaning will be the same either way.

Nowadays, reading e-book is more convenient than reading paper books.

Nowadays, reading e-book iss are more convenient than paper books.

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