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我是加拿大人。我说英语,我学汉语。我喜欢吃咸的菜。我不喜欢跑步。我每天喝甜的咖啡和牛茶。我是音乐老师, 我的老公是律师。他喜欢吃薯条和辣的菜。我们的家有三口人,我,老公 和 我们的狗。


I am Canadian. I speak English, and I am learning Chinese. I like eating salty food. I do not like running. Every day I drink sweet coffee and milky tea. I am a music teacher, and my husband is a lawyer. He likes eating French fries and spicy foods. Our family has three people, me, my husband, and our dog.

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Practice essay

我是加拿大人。

的母語是英语,我学汉语。

我喜欢吃咸的菜。

我不喜欢跑步。

我每天喝甜的咖啡和茶。

我是音乐老师, 我的老公是律师。

他喜欢吃薯条和辣的菜。

我们家有三口,我,老公 和 我们的狗。

因為狗不是人,所以不能說「三口人」

我是加拿大人。

说英语,我学汉语。

我喜欢吃咸的菜。

我不喜欢跑步。

我每天喝甜的咖啡和茶。

我是音乐老师, 我的老公是律师。

他喜欢吃薯条和辣的菜。

我们的家有三口人,我,老公 和 :我、我老公和我们的狗。

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ChronicComposer

May 9, 2024

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谢谢! 您的回复非常有帮助。

我说英语,我正在学汉语。

我喜欢吃咸的食物

我每天喝甜的咖啡和茶。

milk tea:奶茶
If you mean all kind of tea with sugar, tou can just use 茶(because you already contain 甜的 in sentence)

他喜欢吃薯条和辣的食物

If the origin sentence is "He likes eating French fries and spicy foods.", we usually just say "他喜欢吃辣" without the word 'food'.
But since 薯条 is already a noun, you can use 辣的食物/辣食.

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ChronicComposer

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你的评论对我帮助很大。谢谢!

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我是加拿大人。


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我说英语,我学汉语。


我说英语,我正在学汉语。

说英语,我学汉语。

的母語是英语,我学汉语。

我喜欢吃咸的菜。


我喜欢吃咸的食物

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我不喜欢跑步。


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我每天喝甜的咖啡和牛茶。


我每天喝甜的咖啡和茶。

milk tea:奶茶 If you mean all kind of tea with sugar, tou can just use 茶(because you already contain 甜的 in sentence)

我每天喝甜的咖啡和茶。

我每天喝甜的咖啡和茶。

我是音乐老师, 我的老公是律师。


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他喜欢吃薯条和辣的菜。


他喜欢吃薯条和辣的食物

If the origin sentence is "He likes eating French fries and spicy foods.", we usually just say "他喜欢吃辣" without the word 'food'. But since 薯条 is already a noun, you can use 辣的食物/辣食.

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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

我们的家有三口人,我,老公 和 我们的狗。


我们的家有三口人,我,老公 和 :我、我老公和我们的狗。

我们家有三口,我,老公 和 我们的狗。

因為狗不是人,所以不能說「三口人」

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