Practice 2026/1/24

I got two days off infrom January 22thnd.

1st, 2nd, 3rd, 4th..9th, 10th..20th..., 21st, 22nd, 23rd, 24th..30th, 31st, 32nd, 33rd, 34th..40th

Basically from 20 onwards, the numbers just repeat the pattern from 1st..10th for the suffix

I was out of money so I went out for a part-time job in the next day.

There is a weedding centre named CEREMON, which is not far from my home.

"wedding" = becoming married to someone
"weeding" = removal of unwanted plants

I usually get there by Ee-bike, but took a bus this time because of the cold weather.

I remembered the last bus is at 23:30pm and I got to the station at 23:17pm after work.

We normally don't write pm if using 24 hour time and when the time itself is clearly 24 hours. People might write am/pm, especially between 10:00am and 12:00pm if the context doesn't make it clear if someone is using 12 hour time or 24 hour time, but for a time like 23:xx where it can only be 24 hour time, they normally wouldn't.

i.e. 11:30pm or 23:30

I was still a little bit nerverous because I had not never been there in deeplate at night.

"still" is a little awkward here as the you don't mention a before time where you were already nervous.

I was not sure whether there was a bus' coming or not.

lLuckily, I took the last bus successfully at 23:40pm and it was moving so fast, that it took just twenty minutes to take me home, while it's fifteen mimnutes at other times.

This is a little bit of an odd sentence as "moving so fast" implies this time was faster than usual, but you said this time took 20 minutes and normally it takes 15 minutes.

wWhat a tough day!

Practice 2026/1/24

It's better to write the whole year. Otherwise, we can't tell if "24" represents the year or the day.

I got two days off starting January 22thnd.

I assume you mean January 22nd was the first day you had off.

I was out of money so I went out for a part-time job in the next day.

There is a weedding centre named CEREMON, which is not far from my home.

weeding = 把杂草
wedding = 婚礼

I usually geto there by E-bike, but took the bus this time because of the cold weather.

I remembered the last bus is at 23:30pm and I got to the station at 23:17pm after work.

When it's obvious that we're using 24-hr time notation, we don't add AM or PM.

I was still a little bit nerverous because I had not never been there in deep night before. More natural: ...been there around midnight before. / ...been there late at night before.

I was not sure whether there was a bus' coming or not.

lLuckily, I took the last bus successfully at 23:40pm and it was moving so fast, it took just twenty minutes to take me home, while it normally takes fifteen mimnutes at other times.

Even though the bus was moving fast, it still took five minutes longer than it takes at other times?

I was really tired and got to fell asleep after taking a quick shower.

wWhat a tough day!

Practice 26/1/24/26

we write dates as month/day/year

I got two days off in January, on the 21st and 22thnd.

Two days can't be one day (January 22th)? Assuming you meant the 21st and 22nd.
You can omit the month and it will be assumed that you're talking about days in the current month

I was out of money so I went out for ato my part-time job in the next day.

"went out for" generally refers to things you do for fun, or things that you schedule yourself at your own leisure, ie. "went out for drinks," "went out for groceries." You can't use it for an obligation where the schedule is determined by someone other than you, like a job. Similarly you wouldn't say "went out for a wedding."

There isIt's at a weeding centrer named CEREMON, which is not far from my home.

Clarifying that this is the place where your job is, otherwise this sentence sounds random and out of place
"weeding"? or is it "wedding"?

I usually get there by Ee-bike, but took the bus this time because of the cold weather.

I remembered the last bus is at 23:30pm and I got the station at 23:17pm after work.

we don't put "am" or "pm" after military/24 hour time. We only use "am" and "pm" when writing time according to a 12 hour clock, such as 11:30pm (=23:30)

I was still a little bit nerverous because I had not never been there in deepthe darkness of night.

"I had not ever been" is technically correct but sounds a little clunky/literary
you can say "been there deep in the night," but I think of that as being around like 3am, for reasons I can't explain it feels a little odd to use here too.

I was not sure whether there was a bus' coming or not.

lLuckily, I took the last bus successfully at 23:40pm, and it was moving so fast, it took just twfifteeny minutes to take me home, while fifteen mimutes other timother times had taken twenty minutes.

I think you mixed up the values xD

I got two days off ion January 22th.

I’m assuming you got the 21st off too?

I was out of money so I went out for ato my partime job in the next day.

There iwas a weedding centre named CEREMON, which is not far from my home.

Is the place called CEREMON or CEREMONY?

I usually get there by E-bike, but I took the bus this time because of the cold weather.

I remembered the last bus is at 23:30pm and I got to the station at 23:17pm after work.

I was still a little bit nerverous because I had not never been there in deeplate at night.

I was not sure whether there was a bus' coming or not.

luckly, I took the last bus successfully at 23:40pm and it was moving so fast, it took just tweny minutes to take me home, while it usually takes fifteen mimutes other times.

I was really tired and gowent to sleep after taking a quick shower.