July 13, 2023
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Thank you for your encouragement. In fact, I don't think my English is that good. I can't speak English fluently, and I can write in English, but I often make grammar mistakes. So I still need to improve.
Cantonese is like a foreign language to me. I can't speak it, I can't understand it, but I listened to many Cantonese songs that were sung by some very famous Hong Kong singers.
That Beijing uncle will be my role model. I hope I can be as good as him in English. So when I travel overseas, communication won't be a problem.
I don't need to speak English in my daily life. In my city, all the people are Chinese and it is very rare to see an English speaker.
But I still want to learn English. I don't want to waste my spare time, I want to improve myself. Although learning a language is so difficult, it brings me a lot of joy and kind, friendly people.
Thank you for your encouragement.
I can't speak English fluently, andbut I can write in English, butalthough I often make grammar mistakes.
So I still need to improve.
ThatMy Beijing uncle will be my role model.
I hope I can be as good as him in English.
So wWhen I travel overseas, communication won't be a problem.
In my city, all the people are Chinese and it is very rare to see an English speaker.
July 16, 2023
Thank you very much.
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Thank you for your encouragement.
In fact, I don't think my English is that good.
I can't speak English fluently, and; I can write in English, but I often make grammar mistakes.
So I still need to improve.
Cantonese is like a foreign language to me.
I can't speak it, I can't understand it, but I've listened to many Cantonese songs that were sung by some very famous Hong Kong singers.
your version is not incorrect, but present perfect sounds more natural here
That Beijing uncle will be my role model.
I hope I can be as good as him in English.
So when I travel overseas, communication won't be a problem.
I don't need to speak English in my daily life.
In my city, all the people are Chinese and it is very rare to see an English speaker.
But I still want to learn English.
I don't want to waste my spare time,; I want to improve myself.
Although learning a language is so difficult, it brings me a lot of joy and the opportunity to meet kind, friendly people.
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Great work! Only very minor things :)
July 14, 2023
Thank you very much.
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Thank you for your encouragement.
In fact, I don't think my English is that good.
I can't speak English fluently, and although I can write in English, but I often make grammar mistakes.
It sounds weird and unnatural to hear something negative (can't) and positive (can) and then "but...". You could also separate it into two separate sentences if you prefer that.
Cantonese is like a foreign language to me.
I can't speak it, I can't understand it, but I have listened to many Cantonese songs that were sung by some very famous Hong Kong singers.
"Listened" makes it sound like you only listened to them once or all in one sitting and I don't think that is what you mean.
That Beijing uncle will be my role model.
I hope I can be as good as him in English.
I don't need to speak English in my daily life.
In my city, all the people are Chinese and it is very rare to see an English speaker.
Although learning a language is sovery difficult, it brings me a lot of joy and kind, friendly people.
A more natural word choice for this sentence is very.
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I am very inspired by how important learning English is for you. While you do have grammar mistakes, everything is easily understood :)
July 14, 2023
Thank you very much.
Thank you for yourthe encouragement.
Additionally: Thank you for your encouraging remarks.
Thank you for encouraging me.
In factTruthfully, I don't think my English is that good.
I can't speak English fluently, and. Though I can write in English, but I often make grammar mistakes.
I can't speak it, I can't neither speak nor understand it, but I listened to many Cantonese songs that were sung by some very famous Hong Kong singers.
That Beijing uncle will be my role model for improving my English.
I suggest combining this sentence and the one afterwards' ideas for clarity.
SoI want to improve my English so that when I travel overseas, communicationg in English-speaking countries won't be a problem.
I specified English-speaking countries for clarity.
ButHowever, I still want to learn English.
I don't want to waste my spare time, and I want to improve myself.
Although learning a language is so difficult, it brings me a lot of joy andjoy and allows me to meet kind, friendly people.
July 14, 2023
Thank you very much.
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Thank you for your encouragement.
(In fact / To be honest), I don't think my English is that good.
This works - just sounds a little unnatural.
I can't speak English fluently, and. I can write in English, but I often make grammar mistakes.
More natural
So I still need to improve.
Cantonese is like a foreign language to me.
I can't speak it, I can't understand it, but I listened to many Cantonese songs that were sung by some very famous Hong Kong singers.
ThatMy uncle in Beijing uncle(?) will be my role model.
Not sure what you are trying to say here, exactly.
I hope I can be as good as him in English.
So when I travel overseas, communication won't be a problem.
I don't need to speak English in my daily life.
In my city, all the people are Chinese and it is very rare to see an English speaker.
But I still want to learn English.
You could combine this with previous sentence, but this works too!
I don't want to waste my spare time,. I want to improve myself.
Although learning a language is so difficult, it brings me a lot of joy and allows me to meet new kind, friendly people.
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Great job! Keep it up!
July 14, 2023
ThatMy uncle in Beijing uncle(?) will be my role model.
This English paragraph is the response to my language partner. In her message, she mentioned a 北京大叔(Beijing Uncle) whose English was so good that he traveled the world.
July 14, 2023
Thank you very much.
July 14, 2023
This English paragraph is the response to my language partner. In her message, she mentioned a 北京大叔(Beijing Uncle) whose English was so good that he traveled the world.
Ah! In english, we only call our parents brothers(or brother in laws) uncles, maybe it would be best to explain who he is first like "My language exchange partner knew a man whose english was so good that he traveled the world". I got what you were saying since I speak Japanese too, but people who only speak english would probably be confused.
Thank you for your encouragement.
I can't speak English fluently, and I can write in English, but I often make grammar mistakes.
So I still need to improve.
Cantonese is like a foreign language to me.
I can't speak it, I can't understand it, but I listened to many Cantonese songs that weare sung by some very famous Hong Kong singers.
That Beijing uncle will beis my role model.
I hope I can be as good as him in English.
So when I travel overseas, communication won't be a problem.
I don't need to speak English in my daily life.
In my city, all the people are Chinese and it is very rare to see an English speaker.
But I still want to learn English.
I don't want to waste my spare time, I want to improve myself.
Although learning a language is so difficult, it brings me a lot of joy and kind, friendly people.
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Well done! Your grammar is very good!
July 14, 2023
Thank you very much.
July 14, 2023
Ah! In english, we only call our parents brothers(or brother in laws) uncles, maybe it would be best to explain who he is first like "My language exchange partner knew a man whose english was so good that he traveled the world". I got what you were saying since I speak Japanese too, but people who only speak english would probably be confused.
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