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April 11, 2023

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Ladies and gentlemen, good afternoon.
Let's give a big applause to Ms. Zhao, who is the first tier writer, poet and painter in China.
She was the founder of the pear blossom style poetry in 2006 and now is an accomplished painter.
Her presence makes our group shine and classic. We really appreciate it.
Ladies and gentlemen, the people in our group are all kind, friendly and highly educated. Let's push this characteristic up to a new level to make a better group for everyone.

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Ladies and gentlemen, good afternoon.

Let's give a big applause to Ms. Zhao, who is the first tier writer, poet and painter in China.

She was the founder of the pear blossom style poetry style in 2006 and now is an accomplished painter.

Her presence makes our group shine and classic.

I'm unsure what you mean by "classic". Are you saying her poetry has classical elements or is her presence classical?

We really appreciate it.

Ladies and gentlemen, the people in our group are allis kind, friendly, and highly educated.

I feel like it sounds better like this, but it's stylistic, so no need to take it too seriously.

Let's push thisese characteristics up to a new level to make a better group for everyone.

You referred to 3 earlier.

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Keep it up!

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Jack

April 11, 2023

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Her presence makes our group shine and classic.

Can I say her presence makes our WeChat group classic/classical?

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Jack

April 11, 2023

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Ladies and gentlemen, the people in our group are allis kind, friendly, and highly educated.

I think I should say “the people in our WeChat group…”

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Jack

April 11, 2023

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Let's push thisese characteristics up to a new level to make a better group for everyone.

Yes, you are right.

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Jack

April 11, 2023

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Thank you very much.

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trish77857

April 11, 2023

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Can I say her presence makes our WeChat group classic/classical?

I mean, you can, but it wouldn't sound natural. Consider using a different word instead of classic/classical.

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Jack

April 11, 2023

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I mean, you can, but it wouldn't sound natural. Consider using a different word instead of classic/classical.

Thank you.

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Ladies and gentlemen, good afternoon.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Let's give a big applause to Ms. Zhao, who is the first tier writer, poet and painter in China.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

She was the founder of the pear blossom style poetry in 2006 and now is an accomplished painter.


She was the founder of the pear blossom style poetry style in 2006 and now is an accomplished painter.

Her presence makes our group shine and classic.


Her presence makes our group shine and classic.

I'm unsure what you mean by "classic". Are you saying her poetry has classical elements or is her presence classical?

We really appreciate it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Ladies and gentlemen, the people in our group are all kind, friendly and highly educated.


Ladies and gentlemen, the people in our group are allis kind, friendly, and highly educated.

I feel like it sounds better like this, but it's stylistic, so no need to take it too seriously.

Let's push this characteristic up to a new level to make a better group for everyone.


Let's push thisese characteristics up to a new level to make a better group for everyone.

You referred to 3 earlier.

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