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Taipei 101
Taipei 101 is one of the world's tallest buildings.
It's huge, and Alex's mission is to climb the entire 1667 feet of the skyscraper without ropes, known as free soloing, live on TV.
But his three stage route will pose many problems.
I watched the live on TV.
Climbing without any equipment, I was a little scared even just watching it.
It's incredible after everything that he has done to get to this point.
It's unbelievable, every superlative that you can come up with breath.
40-year-old Alex successfully reached the summit, taking 1 hour and 31 minutes.
Alex's muscles are as strong as steel, but what's even more impressive is his fearless determination.
台北101 是世界上最高的建筑之一。
它如此巨大，而埃里克斯的任务是不借助绳索、以自由攀岩的方式攀登这座高达 1667 英尺的摩天大楼，并在电视上进行直播。
但他的三段式路线将带来许多问题。
我在电视上观看了现场直播。
他做了这么多才走到今天这一步，真是难以置信。
这简直不可思议，你能想到的所有形容词都不足以形容这一切。
40岁的埃里克斯成功登顶，耗时1小时31分。
徒手攀爬，我看的都有点害怕。
埃里克斯的肌肉简直像钢铁一样，但是比钢铁还硬的是他无所畏惧的意志。
Taipei 101
Taipei 101 is one of the world's tallest buildings.
It's huge, and Alex's mission, engaging in a form of climbing known as 'free soloing', is to climb the entire 1667 feet of the skyscraper without ropes, known as free soloing, live on TV.
I think the element of 'climbing without ropes' should be emphasised as being what free soloing actually is, so I changed the sentence order a bit to reflect that.
But his three stage route will pose many problems.
I watched the live on TV.
C(With him) climbing without any equipment, I was a little scared even just watching it.
I think in spoken language it is perhaps okay, but I just added a bit of verbosity due to this being written language.
It's incredible after everything that he has done to get to this point.
It's unbelievable, every superlative that you can come up with breath.
40-year-old Alex successfully reached the summit, taking 1 hour and 31 minutes.
Alex's muscles are as strong as steel, but what's even more impressive is his fearless determination.
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I really like the text you wrote and I think you did a great job in expressing your amazement towards his achievement! Overall very nice writing and a pleasant read. 😊
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Taipei 101 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Taipei 101 is one of the world's tallest buildings. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's huge, and Alex's mission is to climb the entire 1667 feet of the skyscraper without ropes, known as free soloing, live on TV. It's huge, and Alex's mission, engaging in a form of climbing known as 'free soloing', is to climb the entire 1667 feet of the skyscraper without ropes, I think the element of 'climbing without ropes' should be emphasised as being what free soloing actually is, so I changed the sentence order a bit to reflect that. |
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But his three stage route will pose many problems. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I watched the live on TV. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Climbing without any equipment, I was a little scared even just watching it.
I think in spoken language it is perhaps okay, but I just added a bit of verbosity due to this being written language. |
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It's incredible after everything that he has done to get to this point. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's unbelievable, every superlative that you can come up with breath. It's unbelievable, every superlative that you can come up with |
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40-year-old Alex successfully reached the summit, taking 1 hour and 31 minutes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Alex's muscles are as strong as steel, but what's even more impressive is his fearless determination. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I watched the live broadcast on TV. |
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