March 30, 2024
A woman, was trafficked and sold to a forced marriage in a far rural area, just a few days after she birthed a daughter. She had been tortured by her husband, the buyer, and then had some mental problems and just did a hard job on the land.
Many years later, volunteers found the tragic mother and brought her daughter and the woman's brother to have this surprising meeting. Initially, the woman couldn't recognize her relatives and kept her distance intentionally from them. However, when she confirmed a birthmark on her daughter's left wrist. The three rushed tears while embracing each other.
The love of family bonds is magic that comes from nature and birth, that can somewhat cure and at least towards healing mental problems. I hope they will be returning to a normal and lovely life.
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A woman, was trafficked and sold to a forced marriage in a far rural area, just a few days after she birthed a daughter.
She had been tortured by her husband, the buyer, and then had some mental problems and just did a hard job on the land.
Many years later, volunteers found the tragic mother and brought her daughter and the woman's brother to have this surprising meeting.
Initially, the woman couldn't recognize her relatives and kept her distance intentionally from them.
However, when she confirmedhecked for a birthmark on her daughter's left wrist.
The three rushed tears while embracing each other.
The love of family bonds is magic that comes from nature and birth, that can somewhat cure and at least towards healing mental problems.
I hope they will be returning to a normal and lovely life.
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I don't get what you mean by "hard job on the land." Like, is that what she did for work?
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Initially, the woman couldn't recognize her relatives and kept her distance intentionally from them.
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You can't have a period if you didn't complete the thought, you know!
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Whoaaaa. I'm genuinely surprised that such a thing could happen in the first place. The fact that people can do something so inhumane just disappoints me. I'm glad they were able to reunite, though
A woman, was trafficked and sold into a forced marriage in a far rural area, just a few days after she birthed a daughter.
Might be more natural to say: "Just a few days after she gave birth to a daughter, a woman was trafficked and sold into a forced marriage in a far away rural area."
She had been tortured by her husband, the buyer, and then had some mental problems and just did a hard job on the land.
The last part (did a hard job on the land) is a bit unnatural. You could say "painfully worked the land" which would sound better. If I'm being nitpicky, I would restructure the sentence like this: Her husband, the buyer, would torture his already mentally unwell "wife" by forcing her to gruelingly work the land.
Many years later, volunteers found the tragic mother and brought her daughter and the woman's brother to have this surprisinge meeting.
Initially, the woman couldn't recognize her relatives and intentionally kept her distance intentionally from them.
The three rushed tearears streamed down their faces while embracing each other.
You could also say "tears rushed down their faces"
The love of family bonds is magic that comes from nature and birth, that can somewhat cure and at least go towards healing mental problems.
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これはたったの物語のか知りたいです。 とにかくとても悲しいのに、家族とまた会ってうれしいです。
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A woman, was trafficked and sold to a forced marriage in a far rural area, just a few days after she gave birthed to a daughter.
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Many years later, volunteers found the tragic mother and brought her daughter and the woman's brother to have thisa surprisinge meeting.
Initially, the woman couldn't recognize her relatives and kept her distance intentionally from them.
However, when she confirmed a birthmark on her daughter's left wrist.,
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The love of family bonds is magic that comes from nature and birth, that can somewhat cure and at leastd towards healing mental problems.
I hope they will be returning to a normal and lovely life.
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