Oct. 28, 2020
Poverty in Russia
It is known that Russia is the county with one of the largest gaps of income, and this inequality continues to rise. Russia numbers more than 50% of ordinary people living below poverty line, whereas numerous Forbes list dollar billionaires came from this country. In confirmation statistics says 83% of riches in Russia belong to only 10% of its population, and this is the highest concentration of welfare in close group hands in the world.
But who can be considered as poor people in Russia? If you see people in frayed and ripped cloth begging on the streets or searching for food residuals in waste container or collecting tin jars from trash bins, than you should know this is only the tip of the iceberg. The reality is that poor people in Russia are pensioners and state budget-paid employees, like teaches and medical personnel. These people have to survive, but not to live without need, even though they deserve it for their long and fruitful service. Of course, this is not fair to these people.
In contrast to these facts, it is also known about huge natural resources of Russia. Consequently, Russia is a country of great opportunities and is potentially rich. No doubt, the problem of poverty should be solved by the government. We can discuss a lot about the steps that the government should make exactly, but obviously they should redistribute profits from natural resources between all sections of population. Another objective is to develop economy as a whole, to grow the so-called middle class. That means the state should create well-paid jobs, to allow people to earn for their more wealthy life.
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In confirmation, statistics says 83% of riches in Russia belong to only 10% of its population, and this i. It also has the highest concentration of welfare in close group handrecipients in the world.
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Statistics is plural so uses “say”. Only he/she/it uses “says”.
If you have ever seen people in frayed and ripped cloth begging on the streets or searching for food residuals in waste container or collecting tin jars from trash bins, than you should know this is only the tip of the iceberg.
The “have ever seen” makes it subjunctive. (Hypothetical)
The reality is that poor people in Russia are pensioners and state budget- paid employees, like teachers and medical personnel.
The hyphen between words in effect creates a new custom word.
These people have to survive, but not to live withouteven if they only get what they absolutely need, even though they deserve itmuch more for their long and fruitful service.
That means the state should create well-paid jobs, to allow people to earn fmor their more wealthye, so they can enjoy a more comfortable life.
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Nice job! Some really advanced sentence structure and vocabulary. Nice thoughts too!
Oct. 31, 2020
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Poverty in Russia |
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It is known that Russia is the county with one of the largest gaps of income, and this inequality continues to rise. |
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Russia numbers more than 50% of ordinary people living below poverty line, whereas numerous Forbes list dollar billionaires came from this country. Russia In Russia |
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In confirmation statistics says 83% of riches in Russia belong to only 10% of its population, and this is the highest concentration of welfare in close group hands in the world. In confirmation, statistics say (I’m not sure I have the right understanding of your meaning.) Statistics is plural so uses “say”. Only he/she/it uses “says”. |
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But who can be considered as poor people in Russia? |
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If you see people in frayed and ripped cloth begging on the streets or searching for food residuals in waste container or collecting tin jars from trash bins, than you should know this is only the tip of the iceberg. If you have ever seen people in frayed and ripped cloth begging on the streets or searching for food residuals in waste container or collecting tin jars from trash bins, than you should know this is only the tip of the iceberg. The “have ever seen” makes it subjunctive. (Hypothetical) |
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The reality is that poor people in Russia are pensioners and state budget-paid employees, like teaches and medical personnel. The reality is that poor people in Russia are pensioners and state budget The hyphen between words in effect creates a new custom word. |
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These people have to survive, but not to live without need, even though they deserve it for their long and fruitful service. These people have to survive, |
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Of course, this is not fair to these people. |
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In contrast to these facts, it is also known about huge natural resources of Russia. |
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Consequently, Russia is a country of great opportunities and is potentially rich. |
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No doubt, the problem of poverty should be solved by the government. |
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We can discuss a lot about the steps that the government should make exactly, but obviously they should redistribute profits from natural resources between all sections of population. |
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Another objective is to develop economy as a whole, to grow the so-called middle class. |
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That means the state should create well-paid jobs, to allow people to earn for their more wealthy life. That means the state should create well-paid jobs, to allow people to earn (I may not understand your actual meaning) |
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