April 1, 2023
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To fight against boredom, a museum guard draws eyes on a painting board valued at 1 million euros.
A bored security guard damaged an 888,000 euros painting board. He drew eyes on the faceless figures represented in the artwork in a Russian gallery.
For his first day of work, the security guard had used a ballpen to draw two pairs of eyes on the artist Anna Leporskaya's painting "Trois figures.",
in an abstract art exposition of the center of Yelstin, West Russia.
The name of the murderer hasn't been revealed, but he might be 60 years old and worked for a private security company. This is how the museum declared the case. Since his behavior, he has definitely been fired.
Two visitors have observed this vandalism behavior, and they enjoyed an exposition called "The world as non-objectivity, the birth of new art.", in the center of Eltsine of Lekaterinburg. They are fascinated by art, so they rapidly realized these supplementary details of two or three figures on the painting board in the 1930s, according to The Art Newspaper.
The gallery of Tretyakov in Moscow borrowed the painting board, and it was sent again in the capital of Russia from the next day to be inspected by an art restorer. According to many resources, the artwork was damaged on 7th December last year, and now, it's in the process of restoration.
The security draws eyes can be eliminated without damage to the painting for a long time. Many local media has confirmed that the cost of restoration, estimated at 3000 euros, had been charged by the security company.
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A bored security guard damaged an 888,000 euros painting board.
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This is how the museum declarscribed the case.
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According to many resources, the artwork was damaged on the 7th ofDecember last year, and now, it's in the process of restoration.
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Many local media has confirmed that the cost of restoration, estimated at 3000 euros, had been charged by[to?] the security company.
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April 2, 2023
Yes! Thanks for reminding me! Sorry that day I made it very urgent zzz. Thanks! I am going to modify it!
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To fight against boredom, a museum guard draws eyes on a painting board valued at 1 million euros. To fight against boredom, a museum guard dr |
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A bored security guard damaged an 888,000 euros painting board. A bored security guard damaged an 888,000 euros painting board drawing eyes. A bored security guard damaged an 888,000 euro |
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He drew eyes on the faceless figures represented in the artwork in a Russian gallery. He drew eyes on the faceless figures "Represented" would mean that the faceless figures exist in real life. |
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For his first day of work, the security guard had used a ballpen to draw two pairs of eyes on the artist Anna Leporskaya's painting "Trois figures.
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in an abstract art exposition of the center of Yelstin, West Russia. in an abstract art exposition |
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The name of the murderer hasn't been revealed, but he might be 60 years old and worked for a private security company. The name of the |
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This is how the museum declared the case. This is how the museum de |
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Since his behavior, he has definitely been fired.
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Two visitors have observed this vandalism behavior, and they enjoyed an exposition called "The world as non-objectivity, the birth of new art. Two visitors have observed this vandalism |
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", in the center of Eltsine of Lekaterinburg. ", in the |
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They are fascinated by art, so they rapidly realized these supplementary details of two or three figures on the painting board in the 1930s, according to The Art Newspaper. They are fascinated by art, so they rapidly realized these "Added" is more appropriate here since it shows that the details weren't originally there. |
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The gallery of Tretyakov in Moscow borrowed the painting board, and it was sent again in the capital of Russia from the next day to be inspected by an art restorer. The |
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According to many resources, the artwork was damaged on 7th December last year, and now, it's in the process of restoration. According to many resources, the artwork was damaged on the 7th ofDecember last year, and now, it's in the process of restoration. |
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The security draws eyes can be eliminated without damage to the painting for a long time. The |
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Many local media has confirmed that the cost of restoration, estimated at 3000 euros, had been charged by the security company. Many local media has confirmed that the cost of restoration, estimated at 3000 euros, had been charged |
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Sorry, I was so urgent to make the previous version; I modified it and will send it again here! Sorry, I |
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Thanks for your corrections! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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thanks for reminding me !
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