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Aug. 28, 2021

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According to the illustration uploaded by some twitter user, Japanese language is apparently popular among English-speaking countries such as Northern America, Australia, and New Zealand. (https://www.visualcapitalist.com/most-popular-languages-people-want-to-learn/) However, I'm suspicious about this statics because there is no motivations to learn Japanese other than sightseeing or unique culture. In spite of Chinese population and prosperous economy, it shows that only two countries, Laos and Belize, are interested in Mandarin Chinese. In addition, it must be hard to find Japanese native speakers or learn by themselves. In fact, some Japanese courses have closed down at U.S. universities these days.
Aside from the number of learners, I'm glad to hear that people who have grown up in foreign countries get interested in Japanese culture. I hope that there is a opportunity to talk with them in person after the state of emergency is lifted. I'm so curious about how our society looks through their eyes.

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In spite of Chinesa's large population and its prosperous economy, ithe infographic shows that only people from two countries, Laos and Belize, are interested in Mandarin Chinese.

maybe you can emphasize the size of China's population here?

In addition, it must be hard to find native Japanese native speakers or to learn by themselves.

In fact, some Japanese courses have closed down at U.S. universities these days.

I'm so curious about how our society looks through their eyes.

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Overall this was clear and easy to follow. Keep it up! That infographic was pretty surprising and it was interesting to hear your thoughts on it

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tommy

Aug. 29, 2021

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Thank yor for your correction!

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According to the illustration uploaded by some tan infographic posted by a Twitter user, Japanese language is apparently popularthe most popular language to learn among English-speaking countries such as Northern Americthe United States, Canada, Australia, and New Zealand.

(https://www.visualcapitalist.com/most-popular-languages-people-want-to-learn/) However, I'm suspiciouskeptical about thisese statics because there is nostics. These people probably don't have any motivations to learn Japanese other than sightseeing or unique culture.

In spite of a growing Chinese population and the country's prosperous economy, it shows that only people from two countries, Laos and Belize, are interested in Mandarin Chinese.

In addition, it must be hard to find Japanese native speakersnative Japanese speakers to speak with or learn by themselves.

In fact, some Japanese courses have closed down at U.S. universities these days.

Aside from the number of learners, I'm glad to hear that people who have grown up in foreignfrom other countries getare interested in Japanese culture.

I hope that there is an opportunity to talk with them in person after the state of emergency is lifted.

I'm so curious about how our society looks through their eyes.

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Very good! I mostly edited the passage to clarify what you mean.

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tommy

Aug. 28, 2021

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Your correction made my writing concise. Thank you!

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According to the illustration uploaded by some twitter user, Japanese language is apparently popular among English-speaking countries such as Northern America, Australia, and New Zealand.


According to the illustration uploaded by some tan infographic posted by a Twitter user, Japanese language is apparently popularthe most popular language to learn among English-speaking countries such as Northern Americthe United States, Canada, Australia, and New Zealand.

(https://www.visualcapitalist.com/most-popular-languages-people-want-to-learn/) However, I'm suspicious about this statics because there is no motivations to learn Japanese other than sightseeing or unique culture.


(https://www.visualcapitalist.com/most-popular-languages-people-want-to-learn/) However, I'm suspiciouskeptical about thisese statics because there is nostics. These people probably don't have any motivations to learn Japanese other than sightseeing or unique culture.

In spite of Chinese population and prosperous economy, it shows that only two countries, Laos and Belize, are interested in Mandarin Chinese.


In spite of a growing Chinese population and the country's prosperous economy, it shows that only people from two countries, Laos and Belize, are interested in Mandarin Chinese.

In spite of Chinesa's large population and its prosperous economy, ithe infographic shows that only people from two countries, Laos and Belize, are interested in Mandarin Chinese.

maybe you can emphasize the size of China's population here?

In addition, it must be hard to find Japanese native speakers or learn by themselves.


In addition, it must be hard to find Japanese native speakersnative Japanese speakers to speak with or learn by themselves.

In addition, it must be hard to find native Japanese native speakers or to learn by themselves.

In fact, some Japanese courses have closed down at U.S. universities these days.


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Aside from the number of learners, I'm glad to hear that people who have grown up in foreign countries get interested in Japanese culture.


Aside from the number of learners, I'm glad to hear that people who have grown up in foreignfrom other countries getare interested in Japanese culture.

I hope that there is a opportunity to talk with them in person after the state of emergency is lifted.


I hope that there is an opportunity to talk with them in person after the state of emergency is lifted.

I'm so curious about how our society looks through their eyes.


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