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Embarrassment Situation During Trip

About 10 years ago, I traveled all around Korea only by trains.

During 3 days, I took more than 20 trains and I visited 10 cities for transfers.

During the trip, I had an embarrassment situation because I took a wrong train.

It meant I should change all scheduled trains, and it was not possible at that time.

I noticed the situation and I took off the train after 10 minutes later.

The next scheduled train was 50 km far from my location and 1 hour left.

I took a taxi and fortunately, I could take the next train 5 minutes before it departed.

It was the most nervous moment during traveling, but I remember it as one of interesting memories, now.

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During 3 days, I took more than 20 trains and I visited 10 cities for transfers.

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The next scheduled train was 50 km far from my location and 1 hour left.


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During 3 days, I took more than 20 trains and I visited 10 cities for transfers.


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I took a taxi and fortunately, I could take the next train 5 minutes before it departed.


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It was the most nervous moment during traveling, but I remember it as one of interesting memories, now.


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