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In English titles, all words are capitalised except for articles, conjunctions, and prepositions :)

Polly lives with her family ofn a farm . Theyre are three generations in her family.

When you use a singular noun like "Polly", you need to add an 's' to the verb.

Every morning she wakes up onat 5 clock and works byon the farm on the weekend . After the school make sheshe does her homework or plays with her girlfriends.

In English, you "do" homework rather than "make" it. You also don't need an article when you use the word "after", unlike "nach" in German :)

She loves all animals and treats them good well.

"well" is the adverb form of "good".

In her free time feed sheshe feeds the rabbits and brushes the horse and the ponies.

Unlike in German, the verb isn't always in the second position in an English sentence. Instead, it usually goes straight after the subject ("she" in this sentence).

EShe especially like yous her cow bella but than she new milk to fetch was she gone she could bella found anywhere .

I'm not completely sure if I've interpreted this sentence right -- sorry if you meant something else! Also, you wouldn't begin a sentence with the word "especially" in this context.

Afterwards, she gowent to her parents and mMother found bBella in the rascal but she looked bad: hiser belly was red and rare bloody.

"Rare" doesn't make sense here. If you were translating "blutig", that can mean "rare" but only in the context of lightly-cooked meat. "Bloody" is a better translation :)

Polly M's mother called a doctor and she get babies to the world she was postilionave birth.

This is a bit confusing but if you're using "mother" as a title/name, eg. "I'm calling Mother", then it needs a capital letter. But if you're talking about someone as a mother, eg. "I'm calling my mother" or "Where is your mother?" then there is no capital letter needed. :)

Also, "gave birth" is more natural and fluent.

Polly loves the babies from hiser favourite cow and they give great milk.

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She loves all animals and treats them good nicely.

In her free time, she feed shes the rabbits and brushes the horses and the ponies.

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