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POLISH SCIENTISTS ARE NEW BRITISH

Keep an eye out if your SIM card-driven GPS tracker gets lost
This incident occurred with Polish scientists in 2018. It started a year earlier when the environmental EcoLogic group began to research storks’ migratory habits. To do so, they placed a GPS tracker with a cellular SIM card in it to track the migration of the birds. The researchers had been able to successfully trace the bird to the Blue Nile Valley in Sudan when the connection was lost. They didn’t think much of the occasion but it was only until they got a $2700 phone bill to pay in their mail box. That was then that it dawned on them that somebody in Sudan found the GPS tracker, extracted the SIM card and started making phone calls all around the world! It had been more than 20 hours worth of phone calls when the researchers deactivated the SIM card. The fact that the person who found the GPS tracker was able to make phone calls looks weird enough since there are now specific internet-only SIM cards widely available for such purposes. Unfortunately, the scientist had to pay the bill from their own pockets.

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Keep an eye out if your SIM card-driven GPS tracker gets lostThis incident occurred with. The following incident happened to Polish scientists in 2018.

It started a year earlier when the environmental group EcoLogic group began to research storks’ migratory habits.

To do so, theyResearchers placed a GPS tracker with a cellular SIM card in it on a bird to track theits migration of the birdory habits.

The researchers had been able to successfully tracek the bird to the Blue Nile Valley in Sudan when the connection was lost.

That was twhen that it dawned on themey discovered that somebody in Sudan found the GPS tracker, extracted the SIM card and started making phone calls all around the world!

Unfortunately, the scientist had to pay the bill from their own pockets.

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Jan. 5, 2020

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Thanks! Means a lot to me!

Keep an eye out if your SIM card-driven GPS tracker gets lost. This incident occurred with Polish scientists in 2018.

It started a year earlier when the environmental EcoLogic group began to research storks’ migratory habits.

To do so, they placed a GPS tracker with a cellular SIM card in it on a bird to track theits migration of the birds.

The researchers had been able to successfully trace the bird to the Blue Nile Valley in Sudan when the connection was lost.

They didn’t think much of ithe occasion but it was only until they got a $2,700 phone bill to pay in their mail box.

You don't need to include "to pay" since bills are something that one has to pay.

That was then that it dawned on themey found that somebody in Sudan found the GPS tracker, extracted the SIM card, and started making phone calls all around the world!

Only use "dawned on" when someone realizes something on their own. That wasn't a thought that they had; it was information that they found out.

ItThere had been more than 20 hours worth of phone calls whenmade by the time the researchers deactivated the SIM card.

The fact that the person who found the GPS tracker was able to make phone calls lookwas weird enough since there are now specific internet-only SIM cards widely available for such purposes.

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arccosinus

Jan. 5, 2020

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Thank you A LOT! Your corrections are very helpful

POLISH SCIENTISTS ARE NEW BRITISH


Keep an eye out if your SIM card-driven GPS tracker gets lostThis incident occurred with Polish scientists in 2018.


Keep an eye out if your SIM card-driven GPS tracker gets lost. This incident occurred with Polish scientists in 2018.

Keep an eye out if your SIM card-driven GPS tracker gets lostThis incident occurred with. The following incident happened to Polish scientists in 2018.

It started a year earlier when the environmental EcoLogic group began to research storks’ migratory habits.


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It started a year earlier when the environmental group EcoLogic group began to research storks’ migratory habits.

To do so, they placed a GPS tracker with a cellular SIM card in it to track the migration of the birds.


To do so, they placed a GPS tracker with a cellular SIM card in it on a bird to track theits migration of the birds.

To do so, theyResearchers placed a GPS tracker with a cellular SIM card in it on a bird to track theits migration of the birdory habits.

The researchers had been able to successfully trace the bird to the Blue Nile Valley in Sudan when the connection was lost.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The researchers had been able to successfully tracek the bird to the Blue Nile Valley in Sudan when the connection was lost.

They didn’t think much of the occasion but it was only until they got a $2700 phone bill to pay in their mail box.


They didn’t think much of ithe occasion but it was only until they got a $2,700 phone bill to pay in their mail box.

You don't need to include "to pay" since bills are something that one has to pay.

That was then that it dawned on them that somebody in Sudan found the GPS tracker, extracted the SIM card and started making phone calls all around the world!


That was then that it dawned on themey found that somebody in Sudan found the GPS tracker, extracted the SIM card, and started making phone calls all around the world!

Only use "dawned on" when someone realizes something on their own. That wasn't a thought that they had; it was information that they found out.

That was twhen that it dawned on themey discovered that somebody in Sudan found the GPS tracker, extracted the SIM card and started making phone calls all around the world!

It had been more than 20 hours worth of phone calls when the researchers deactivated the SIM card.


ItThere had been more than 20 hours worth of phone calls whenmade by the time the researchers deactivated the SIM card.

The fact that the person who found the GPS tracker was able to make phone calls looks weird enough since there are now specific internet-only SIM cards widely available for such purposes.


The fact that the person who found the GPS tracker was able to make phone calls lookwas weird enough since there are now specific internet-only SIM cards widely available for such purposes.

Unfortunately, the scientist had to pay the bill from their own pockets.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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