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Poker
My colleagues suggested playing poker at the next corporate party. "Wow," I thought, "Another thing which I know nothing about." They added that it would be a game for money.
"What a surprise," I thought, "I'm going to lose my money."
As you noticed, I'm not excited about this idea. Of course, they suggested making small bets, but you know how it could turn out.
Secondly, I have a superstition about gambling. I think a person has a limit of luck. I'm serious. Imagine, you have 10,000 lucky coins. You can spend them on a lot of things, like a happy marriage, a successful career, and so on. However, you decide to spend them on gambling, really? You would be broke by the time you wanted something more precious.
On the other hand, a part of me wants to play. I'm not adventurous, but I'm the curious type. And I don't want to pass up an opportunity to strengthen bonds with colleagues... I haven't decided yet...
Проверь на ошибки грамматики пунктуации орфографии стилистики. Покажи ошибки но не исправляй
My colleagues suggested playing poker at the next corporatempany party.
"Wow," I thought, "Another thing which I know nothing about."
They added that it would be a game for money.
"What a surprise," I thought, "I'm going to lose my money."
As you noticed, I'm not excited about this idea.
Of course, they suggested making small bets, but you know how it could turn out.
Secondly, I have a superstition about gambling.
I think aevery person has a limit of luck.
Poker
My colleagues suggested playing poker at the next corporate party.
"Wow," I thought, "Another thing which I know nothing about."
They added that it would be a game for money.
"What a surprise," I thought, "I'm going to lose my money."
As you may have noticed, I'm not excited about this idea.
Of course, they suggested making small bets, but you know how it could turn out.
Secondly, I have a superstition about gambling.
I think a person has a limited amount of luck.
I'm serious.
Imagine, you have 10,000 lucky coins.
You can spend them on a lot of things, like a happy marriage, a successful career, and so on.,
However,but you decide to spend them on gambling, really?
"however" is sophisticated while "really?" is casual, it sounds weird to have both in one sentence.
You would be broke by the time you wanted something more precious.
On the other hand, a part of me wants to play.
I'm not adventurous, but I'm the curious type.
Aand I don't want to pass up an opportunity to strengthen my bonds with my colleagues...
I haven't decided yet...
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I don't speak Russian but that was very good!
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My colleagues suggested playing poker at the next corporate party. This sentence has been marked as perfect! My colleagues suggested playing poker at the next co |
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"Wow," I thought, "Another thing which I know nothing about." This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They added that it would be a game for money. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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"What a surprise," I thought, "I'm going to lose my money." This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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And I don't want to pass up an opportunity to strengthen bonds with colleagues...
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I haven't decided yet... This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Проверь на ошибки грамматики пунктуации орфографии стилистики. |
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Покажи ошибки но не исправляй |
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As you noticed, I'm not excited about this idea. As you may have noticed, I'm not excited about this idea. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Of course, they suggested making small bets, but you know how it could turn out. Of course, they suggested making small bets, but you know how it could turn out. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Secondly, I have a superstition about gambling. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I think a person has a limit of luck. I think a person has a limited amount of luck. I think |
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I'm serious. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Imagine, you have 10,000 lucky coins. Imagine |
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You can spend them on a lot of things, like a happy marriage, a successful career, and so on. You can spend them on a lot of things, like a happy marriage, a successful career, and so on |
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However, you decide to spend them on gambling, really?
"however" is sophisticated while "really?" is casual, it sounds weird to have both in one sentence. |
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You would be broke by the time you wanted something more precious. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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On the other hand, a part of me wants to play. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I'm not adventurous, but I'm the curious type. I'm not adventurous, but I'm the curious type |
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