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BlackGlasses

Oct. 17, 2022

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Poetry.

I'm learning japanese too so I often create haikus when I feel bad or good, to express and free myself, they're not perfect and when someone tell me when I was wrong and why makes me happy, I feel happy when I'm mistaken because I'm human and if I get wrong that means that I'm improving, one of my favourites mistakes was the following haiku: With warm words winter isn't cold and Tonight eyes don't feel like sleeping, it's scary.

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Poetry.

I'm learning jJapanese too, so I often create haikus when I feel bad or good, to express and free myself, t. They're not perfect, and when someone tells me when I was wrong and why, it makes me happy,. I feel happy when I'm mistaken because I'm human and if I get something wrong that means that I'm improving, o. One of my favourites mistakes was the following haiku: With warm words winter isn't cold and Ttonight eyes don't feel like sleeping, it's scary.

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That's a cool idea to write haikus about how you feel! Very nice.

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BlackGlasses

Oct. 18, 2022

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I'm learning jJapanese too, so I often create haikus when I feel bad or good, to express and free myself, t. They're not perfect, and when someone tells me when I was wrong and why, it makes me happy,. I feel happy when I'm mistaken because I'm human and if I get something wrong that means that I'm improving, o. One of my favourites mistakes was the following haiku: With warm words winter isn't cold and Ttonight eyes don't feel like sleeping, it's scary.

¡Thank you so much! It means a lot for me.

I'm learning jJapanese too, so I often create haikus when I feel bad or good, to express and free myself, they're not perfect and when someone tells me when I was wrong and why, it makes me happy, I feel happy when I'm mistakenwrong because I'm human and if I get it wrong, it that means that I'm improving, o. One of my favourites mistakes was the following haiku: With warm words winter isn't cold and Tonight eyes don't feel like sleeping, it's scary.

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Nice!!!

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BlackGlasses

Oct. 18, 2022

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¡Thank you so much!, you really helped me a lot, I wish I could help you with something too.

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aedw

Oct. 18, 2022

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¡Thank you so much!, you really helped me a lot, I wish I could help you with something too.

You're welcome!

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I'm learning japanese too so I often create haikus when I feel bad or good, to express and free myself, they're not perfect and when someone tell me when I was wrong and why makes me happy, I feel happy when I'm mistaken because I'm human and if I get wrong that means that I'm improving.


I'm learning japanese too so I often create haikus when I feel bad or good, to express and free myself, they're not perfect and when someone tell me when I was wrong and why makes me happy, I feel happy when I'm mistaken because I'm human and if I get wrong that means that I'm improving, one of my favourites mistakes was the following haiku: With warm words winter isn't cold and Tonight eyes don't feel like sleeping, it's scary.


I'm learning jJapanese too, so I often create haikus when I feel bad or good, to express and free myself, they're not perfect and when someone tells me when I was wrong and why, it makes me happy, I feel happy when I'm mistakenwrong because I'm human and if I get it wrong, it that means that I'm improving, o. One of my favourites mistakes was the following haiku: With warm words winter isn't cold and Tonight eyes don't feel like sleeping, it's scary.

I'm learning jJapanese too, so I often create haikus when I feel bad or good, to express and free myself, t. They're not perfect, and when someone tells me when I was wrong and why, it makes me happy,. I feel happy when I'm mistaken because I'm human and if I get something wrong that means that I'm improving, o. One of my favourites mistakes was the following haiku: With warm words winter isn't cold and Ttonight eyes don't feel like sleeping, it's scary.

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