March 8, 2021
Poaching
In 2018, a married couple was arrested for poaching shellfish. Surprisingly, they were both above 70 years old. They eluded for an hour when found by the police. The boat was a small craft and its engine was converted to be more powerful. You can see the scene on YouTube. (https://youtu.be/jOavJpl9oNY?t=13) It's like a scene from a movie.
Poaching
In 2018, a married couple was arrested for poaching shellfish.
Surprisingly, they were both abover 70 years old.
Yours is technically correct but this sounds more natural in the US.
They eluded police for an hour when found by the policebefore they were caught.
This sounds more natural in the US.
The boat was a small craft and its engine was converted to bemake it more powerful.
You can see the scenewatch it on YouTube.
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(https://youtu.be/jOavJpl9oNY?t=13) It's like a scene from a movie.
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March 9, 2021
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In 2018, a married couple was arrested for poaching shellfish. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Surprisingly, they were both above 70 years old. Surprisingly, they were both Yours is technically correct but this sounds more natural in the US. |
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They eluded for an hour when found by the police. They eluded police for an hour This sounds more natural in the US. |
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The boat was a small craft and its engine was converted to be more powerful. The boat was a small craft and its engine was converted to |
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You can see the scene on YouTube. You can Alternative |
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(https://youtu.be/jOavJpl9oNY?t=13) It's like a scene from a movie. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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