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Brief retelling of Alice in wonderland chapter 1

It was a hot summer day. Alice was sat next to her sister on the bank, and she is too tired with her sister's no picture and conversation book, nearly got to sleep. Suddenly she saw a white rabbit with whitecoat looking at he's watch. "hurry up, hurry up, I will be late" the rabbit said and hastily ran away.
Alice was so curious about the rabbit that she hurry off following the rabbit and down to a deep rabbit hole. After a long time fall, Alice drew into a room with a lot of locked door.
Looked for a few minutes, Alice found a small door which lead into a lovely garden. But for Alice the door is too small to across it. A few tries after, the little poor Alice still haven't open the door, she sat down and cried so hard, all of her tear have becoming a tear pool.


This is the brief retelling of Alice in wonderland chapter 1. Could you please help me correct the mistakes and replace it with daily usage.

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It was a hot summer day.

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March 14, 2022

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It was a hot summer day.

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Brief retelling of Alice in wonderland chapter 1

It was a hot summer day.

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Brief retelling of Alice in wonderland chapter 1


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It was a hot summer day.


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Alice was sat next to her sister on the bank, and she is too tired with her sister's no picture and conversation book, nearly got to sleep.


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Suddenly she saw a write rabbit with writecoat looking at he's watch.


Suddenly she saw a wrhite rabbit within a wrhite coat looking at he'is watch. Suddenly she saw a white rabbit in a white coat looking at his watch.

Maybe you meant a waistcoat? I went with "white coat" since the typo matched "write/white" before it.

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Suddenly she saw a wrhite rabbit with writeaistcoat looking at he'is watch. Suddenly she saw a white rabbit with waistcoat looking at his watch.

"hurry up, hurry up, I will be late" the rabbit said and hastily ran away.


"hHurry up, hurry up, I will'm going to be late", the rabbit said andbefore hastily ranunning away. "Hurry up, hurry up, I'm going to be late", the rabbit said before hastily running away.

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Alice was so curious about the rabbit that she hurry off following the rabbit and down to a deep rabbit hole.


Alice was so curious about the rabbit that she hurryied off following ithe rabbit and down to a deep rabbit hole. Alice was so curious about the rabbit that she hurried off following it down a deep rabbit hole.

Alice was so curious about the rabbit that she hurry off followinged the rabbit and down into a deep rabbit hole. Alice was so curious about the rabbit that she followed the rabbit down into a deep rabbit hole.

Alice was so curious about the rabbit that she hurryied off following the rabbit and went down to a deep rabbit hole. Alice was so curious about the rabbit that she hurried off following the rabbit and went down a deep rabbit hole.

After a long time fall, Alice drew into a room with a lot of locked door.


After a long time fall, Alice drewcame into a room with a lot of locked doors. After a long fall, Alice came into a room with a lot of locked doors.

After a long time fall, Alice drew intocame across a room with a lots of locked doors. After a long fall, Alice came across a room with lots of locked doors.

Looked for a few minents, Alice found a small door which lead into a lovely garden.


LookedAfter looking for a few minentutes, Alice found a small door which lead ing to a lovely garden. After looking for a few minutes, Alice found a small door leading to a lovely garden.

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LookeShe looked around for a few minoments, Alice and found a small door which lead into a lovely garden. She looked around for a few moments and found a small door which lead into a lovely garden.

But for Alice the door is too small to across it.


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But unfortunetly, for Alice the door iwas too small to across itgo through. But unfortunetly, for Alice the door was too small to go through.

But for Alice the door iwas too small to across itgo through. But the door was too small to go through.

A few tries after, the little poor Alice still haven't open the door, she sat down and cried so hard, all of her tear have becoming a tear pool.


A few tries after, thefter many tries, poor little poor Alice still haven't opencouldn't enter the door, s. She sat down and cried so hard, all of her tear have becoming a tears formed a pool. After many tries, poor little Alice still couldn't enter the door. She sat down and cried so hard her tears formed a pool.

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Suddenly she saw a white rabbit with whitecoat looking at he's watch.


Looked for a few minutes, Alice found a small door which lead into a lovely garden.


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