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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.


Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people believe that children should be taught to become a well person in society by there parents at home, while they are others who think that the place is sustaining for learning this is school and i agree with this point of view.


Firstly, some people feel that parents is the person who have a responsibility to teach their child according to this vision, the basis of their children starting from home, parents have to teach them to ensure that they understand about values and their position in the society.

Others people, however, feel that children have to apprehend that information by their teachers, from this point of view in case that, children have not only at home but they also can communicate with friends and teacher each other, moreover whole the time of student is justfor academic so they can enroll some out door activities to increasing their good characteristics.
I absolutely that learning from parents is necessary if parents have to give child all about how to become a good member of society, school will become less importance. In addition, combining between at home and at school is a nessciate work, people have to done this one’s immediately leading their child to become a good person in society,

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Many people believe that children should be taught to become a wellgood person in society by theire parents at home, while theyre are others who think that the place is sustaining for learning this is school, and iI agree with this point of view.

Firstly, some people feel that parents isare the personople who have a responsibility to teach their children according to this vision, the basis of their children starting from home, p. Parents have to teach them to ensure that they understand about values and their position in the society.

Others people, however, feel that children have to apprehend that information by their teachers, f. From this point of view in case that, children havecan learn not only at home, but they also can communicate with friends and teacher each other, moreover whole the time of student is justfor academic sos. Moreover, they can enrolljoin some out door activities after school to increasinge their good characteristics.

I absolutely believe that learning from parents is necessary i. If parents have to giveteach their children all about how to become a good member of society, school will become less importancet.

In addition, combining betweenlearning at home and at school is a nessciatenecessary work, p. People have to done this tone’s immediately leading their child to become a good person in society,.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society.

Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people believe that children should be taught to become a well person in society by there parents at home, while they are others who think that the place is sustaining for learning this is school and i agree with this point of view.

Many people believe that children should be taught to become a wellgood person in society by theire parents at home, while theyre are others who think that the place is sustaining for learning this is school, and iI agree with this point of view.

Firstly, some people feel that parents is the person who have a responsibility to teach their child according to this vision, the basis of their children starting from home, parents have to teach them to ensure that they understand about values and their position in the society.

Firstly, some people feel that parents isare the personople who have a responsibility to teach their children according to this vision, the basis of their children starting from home, p. Parents have to teach them to ensure that they understand about values and their position in the society.

Others people, however, feel that children have to apprehend that information by their teachers, from this point of view in case that, children have not only at home but they also can communicate with friends and teacher each other, moreover whole the time of student is justfor academic so they can enroll some out door activities to increasing their good characteristics.

Others people, however, feel that children have to apprehend that information by their teachers, f. From this point of view in case that, children havecan learn not only at home, but they also can communicate with friends and teacher each other, moreover whole the time of student is justfor academic sos. Moreover, they can enrolljoin some out door activities after school to increasinge their good characteristics.

I absolutely that learning from parents is necessary if parents have to give child all about how to become a good member of society, school will become less importance.

I absolutely believe that learning from parents is necessary i. If parents have to giveteach their children all about how to become a good member of society, school will become less importancet.

In addition, combining between at home and at school is a nessciate work, people have to done this one’s immediately leading their child to become a good person in society,

In addition, combining betweenlearning at home and at school is a nessciatenecessary work, p. People have to done this tone’s immediately leading their child to become a good person in society,.

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